M. L. Kiser Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Sauerkraut

I’ve never liked sauerkraut
The flavor’s just too strong
I want to simply, toss it out
We just don’t get along.

The flavor’s just too strong
Plain cabbage is much better
We just don’t get along
I am a sauerkraut hater.

Plain cabbage, is much better
It’s just so very good
I am a sauerkraut hater
I don’t consider it, to be food.

It’s just so very good…
Plain cabbage with fresh herbs
I don’t consider it, to be food…
Sauerkraut’s for the birds.

Plain cabbage with fresh herbs
Will never be thrown out
Sauerkraut’s for the birds;
I’ve never liked sauerkraut.

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Maurice Yvonne August 20, 2014 at 11:55 AM sauerkraut doesn't like my tummy. fine read. i don't care for sauerkraut but i like you. i like this piece. lots of love (for you not the sauerkraut heeheeheehee.) M. L. Kiser August 20, 2014 at 1:17 PM Thanks for reading and commenting.

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2014 at 5:31 PM I second that emotion. It SUCKS!!! And have you ever tried that Korean dish that is their MAIN food. Its name is Kimchi. go google it. A most disgusting cabbage with assorted veggies and it has been fermenting under the ground forever. YUKKKK. I wanted to spit it out when my students served it to me. M. L. Kiser August 20, 2014 at 9:08 AM I can't bring myself to try anything connected to sauerkraut. Thanks fo reading and commenting.

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2014 at 5:31 PM and I loved this type of pantoum poetry. M. L. Kiser August 20, 2014 at 9:09 AM Thanks, I haven't written too many Pautoum's, but I may explore that a little more..

Sara Kendrick August 19, 2014 at 5:31 PM Great job writing this one to this form which is not easy to write..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara M. L. Kiser August 20, 2014 at 9:09 AM Thanks and I've been enjoying your poems, also.