Saturninity

Saturninity





Blackness in brimming day light
and heart sorely bled on my plight,
Abysmal love that I trusted found,
his pretense left me absolutely astound,

My thoughts are now so forlorn,
soul distressed and utterly torn,
Time swivelled joys to end in frown,
as whole world came toppling down,

As if drowning deep into lagoon of grief,
where empathy balm hurls no relief,
Yearning for one feigned embrace,
will evanesce every fraction of his image,

Flustered by the time's toss,
my esprit is merely an albatross.



Written Dec 2nd, 2015
For contest by Tommy boy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ward Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 11:28 AM
Congratulations on your win, Upma. Julia, :)
Negron Flores Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 6:46 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Dr. Sharma.
Bhurani Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 12:55 AM
Congrats Dr on ur awesome win....stay blessed
A  Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 11:46 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Poe, Poe WIN! SKAT :)
Tor Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Dr. Sharma congratulations again on another excellent win!! Enjoyed reading very much.
Manassian Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 10:28 AM
OH the angst in this piece, my dear Dr Upma. I've missed you. I'm sorry I haven't been around lately. Good luck in the contest.
A. Sharma Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 10:45 AM
Ah so glad to hv ur visit my dear sweeet Eileen! I hv missed you, where hv u been?
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