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Saturninity Blackness in brimming day light and heart sorely bled on my plight, Abysmal love that I trusted found, his pretense left me absolutely astound, My thoughts are now so forlorn, soul distressed and utterly torn, Time swivelled joys to end in frown, as whole world came toppling down, As if drowning deep into lagoon of grief, where empathy balm hurls no relief, Yearning for one feigned embrace, will evanesce every fraction of his image, Flustered by the time's toss, my esprit is merely an albatross. Written Dec 2nd, 2015 For contest by Tommy boy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/4/2015 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Upma. Julia, :)
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Date: 12/3/2015 6:46:00 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Dr. Sharma.
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Date: 12/3/2015 12:55:00 AM
Congrats Dr on ur awesome win....stay blessed
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Date: 12/2/2015 11:46:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Poe, Poe WIN! SKAT :)
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Date: 12/2/2015 6:53:00 PM
Dr. Sharma congratulations again on another excellent win!! Enjoyed reading very much.
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Date: 12/2/2015 10:28:00 AM
OH the angst in this piece, my dear Dr Upma. I've missed you. I'm sorry I haven't been around lately. Good luck in the contest.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 12/2/2015 10:45:00 AM
Ah so glad to hv ur visit my dear sweeet Eileen! I hv missed you, where hv u been?

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