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Saturn

S pectacular sight, beautiful, distant and mysteriou s, A mazing ring attraction, like colors to the nebul a, T antalizingly close, but from golden sun far apar t, U nchecked, wild and free, like egrets on the bayo u! R are, unique space drifter, since the age of cance r, N ewly probed, but scarcely understood, secrets hidde n. Written on 6/1/2021 For: Planet Poetry Contest Sponsor: Matt Caliri

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/27/2021 9:54:00 AM

Great, congratulations on your win

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/27/2021 10:22:00 AM

Thank you very much, Paghunda.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 11/26/2021 4:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win. Fabulous acrostic....love the mystery of Saturn. Blessings, Paulette

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/26/2021 5:21:00 PM

Thank you, Paulette. I am honored by your kind words. Happy holidays, Evelyn

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/25/2021 8:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. "Love It" Have a blessed day with your win...............

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/25/2021 12:29:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. Happy Thanksgiving. :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/21/2021 10:40:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/22/2021 11:54:00 AM

Thank you very much, and God bless you, too.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 11/21/2021 1:35:00 PM

Hello Evelyn, Your Saturn Acrostic is a gem - so remarkably creative. I returned to your page for another read. Congratulations on much deserved recognition. Be well. Brian

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/21/2021 3:47:00 PM

Thank you, Brian. I'm so pleased that you liked it. Have a wonderful week, Evelyn :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/21/2021 12:28:00 PM

superb acrostic, many congrats on your win Evelyn:-) hugs Jan xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/21/2021 3:51:00 PM

Thank you for your kind compliment and congratulations, Jan. hugs xx :=)

Karen Jones

Date: 11/21/2021 11:57:00 AM

Awesome acrostic! Congrats on your 1st place win!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/21/2021 3:52:00 PM

Thank you very much, Karen. :=)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/20/2021 11:06:00 PM

Beautiful acrostic on Saturn. Double acrostic that too. Congratulations!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/21/2021 10:13:00 AM

Thank you so much, Christuraj.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/6/2021 8:31:00 AM

All and every planet has its mysteries, that are so intriguing and alluring, that man can't wait to conquer them and make them livable.. I doubt several of the planets on this galaxy, in fact I am quite certain will not prove successful for human living, but we only need one or two, lets not be greedy. Hugs and blessings.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/6/2021 10:55:00 AM

That is so true, Jennifer. Just one habitable planet would be awesome! My bet is on Mars. Thank you for your thoughts. Kindest regards, Evelyn

Judy Ball

Date: 6/4/2021 2:17:00 PM

WoW! Evelyn this is excellent. And you pulled off a very difficult piece with a double Acrostic. Kudos to you my friend. Good luck in the contest. I'm impressed. God Bless, JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/4/2021 3:31:00 PM

Thank you, Judy. Your words are a bright spot in my day. :D Best of wishes, Evelyn

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/2/2021 6:36:00 AM

WoW! Evelyn, You penned a well written double acrostic about Saturn. Out of all of the planets in the solar system, Saturn stands out because of the ring it has around it. You chose a cool planet. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/2/2021 10:24:00 AM

Saturn was always my favorite planet, even as a child, because of its beauty and mystery. Thanks so much for all of your remarks and well wishes. Have a wonderful day yourself :) Evelyn

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/2/2021 1:11:00 AM

Saturn always fascinated me. With rings and planets orbiting the main planet. Pity it is so far away and uninhabitable. Lovely double acrostic.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/2/2021 10:29:00 AM

Far more advanced generations will enjoy fantastic views, perhaps from one of the moons of Saturn. Thank you for your nice comment. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/1/2021 5:55:00 PM

Wow, this is the best poem I read today. You should have the creation right. This should be double-way acrostic or acro-acro. Think about it, and it could be a new Evelyn form. Very well done; best wishes in the contest

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/1/2021 7:22:00 PM

I sure am delighted with your appreciation and warm remarks, but I really must decline taking credit for the double acrostic. I admired one that someone else had written, and decided to try it myself. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though. Thank you. :D