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Saturday In Huntsville

So far away from home, but it feels like Birmingham Capturing pictures of it all to post on Instagram Now thinking if I should relocate for better perspicacity Alluding that something different will not be bad for me Nick still by my side, no telling what we're getting into He's chosen to drive, and I'll assist on what I can do And I say, "the bomb gals always live near the lakes" He says, "we're almost in Huntsville, and I'm not trying to wait". There we chill, but it's far from frigid outside today Conversation drifts into, "what if we decide to stay?" The Idea is gold, as we hope some day it will happen Soon we wrap it up. And tomorrow? Another Sunday in Gadsden.

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Date: 10/15/2016 8:57:00 PM
Very nice and informative poem Xavier! Good luck if you decide to move to Huntsville; as I live approx. 40 miles north of there!:)
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Xavier Johnson
Date: 10/15/2016 9:16:00 PM
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Date: 10/15/2016 9:03:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem Cheryl! It's a nice place, I will visit often if not move soon :)

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