Saturday Emptiness

SATURDAY EMPTINESS


When are you coming back?
I have this Saturday emptiness
Supporting my heaviness
Amidst the closing night.
At least I am able to entertain my loneliness,
With galaxy of dreams.
I miss your love now,
So come to me and we’ll drink
That unassuming love with joy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Benson Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 12:32 AM
I love the simplicity and imagery. The poem made a lovely read!
Wayne Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 1:00 PM
The last two lines intoxicated me.
Mehta Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 7:51 AM
Very very passionate positive feelings of love and the yearning to be together, Dalila
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