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Saturday Crowds

Why go nuts in a Saturday crunch? Many stores now open 24/7, you see? Packed stores, like monkeys on tall trees. Me, home with tea and a zesty lunch. August 10, 2019 10:30am PST NOTICE: this was listed originally as a limerick. A kind poet said it was not. I had used another source that indicated a limerick could be four lines only. I don't know anymore. So changing it to a rhyme. If you know about four line limerick, .please Soupmail, me? Thanks.

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Date: 8/11/2019 2:10:00 AM
We also tend to avoid the malls on a saturday, Sundays are quieter, not as crazy, Saturdays are like a stampede in progress! Love and hugs, jenn.
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Date: 8/11/2019 2:23:00 AM
Sundays are better, I see a new picture of you! Sunning and lovely. No big malls that close to me. I like boutiques in town Panagiota
Date: 8/10/2019 10:34:00 PM
G'day Panagiota … your verse reminds me of Good Friday and Christmas, well not the days themselves, but the shopping frenzy that leads up to them - stay home is good advice - thank you Panagiota - Lindsay
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Date: 8/11/2019 2:12:00 AM
Ugh the frenzy. I used to work at Macy's at Christmas, People got to be like hyenas and mean as H, athe closer the 25th got. I shop online these days and no, not a shopaholic,)). Feel safer at home and way easier. Thank you Panagiota
Date: 8/10/2019 6:00:00 PM
I am getting so spoiled, if I know it is going to be crowded, a crowbar could not get me out of my lounger. I can relate to this one for sure!
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Date: 8/10/2019 7:12:00 PM
Besides teaching, and Avon and children, also add lounger. )) Funny, no? Add we both lived in Chicago too.))) Panagiota
Date: 8/10/2019 5:03:00 PM
I know! When I do go out, I always think why are so many out here...go home...go home :)
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Date: 8/10/2019 5:05:00 PM
LOL, Kim I go when crowds are not there. Can't bear lines, waiting and packed lots! Panagiota

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