Sunlite Wanter Poet Verse

Saturday

You are roaming, sailing on “our lake,”
While I, while I, dream twilight dreams,
Knowing your roaming is solitaire and alone;
I hide my soul from you, as I wait,
I wait to hear your dreams and hope
You find my bonfire on the shore.

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Regina Mcintosh November 22, 2019 at 11:16 PM Beautifully written. Love it. God bless you, sweet friend., Gina

Sandra Adams November 22, 2019 at 10:00 PM such a longing in this one...i hope your soul lights the way to that bonfire... nicely penned...it can be felt.... hugs

Paul Callus November 22, 2019 at 2:36 PM Short, but lovely and full of feelings, Sunlite. I hope that your dreams will not come to naught, and your bonfire will draw his attention without much delay! Best regards // paul

Heidi Sands November 22, 2019 at 2:15 PM Wow, mysteriously written, but felt too. Well done Sunlite :)

Chris Green November 22, 2019 at 12:28 PM This is sad and lonely my friend. Kind of breaks my heart but you never know, maybe that bonfire will be seen.