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Saturday

You are roaming, sailing on “our lake,” While I, while I, dream twilight dreams, Knowing your roaming is solitaire and alone; I hide my soul from you, as I wait, I wait to hear your dreams and hope You find my bonfire on the shore.

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/22/2019 11:16:00 PM

Beautifully written. Love it. God bless you, sweet friend., Gina

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/22/2019 10:00:00 PM

such a longing in this one...i hope your soul lights the way to that bonfire... nicely penned...it can be felt.... hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 11/22/2019 2:36:00 PM

Short, but lovely and full of feelings, Sunlite. I hope that your dreams will not come to naught, and your bonfire will draw his attention without much delay! Best regards // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/22/2019 2:15:00 PM

Wow, mysteriously written, but felt too. Well done Sunlite :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/22/2019 12:28:00 PM

This is sad and lonely my friend. Kind of breaks my heart but you never know, maybe that bonfire will be seen.