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Saturated In Thoughts

I am saturated in thoughts of you- My mind encompassed by your heart divine. Our love created the perfect design, I made you see things that love never knew. When eventide came we embraced the moon, constellations aligned and we caressed. I have confessed to you how much I’m blessed remembering those nights in early June. We’re enveloped by a rare connection, free each other with kindness and warm care. I saved you from a poor life of despair, redeemed you and gave your heart affection. Loved are we since we started this safe path, fulfilled with luminous magic that burns. With my eager wish for a love that yearns, we are dignified with passion not wrath. Now I seek the sentiments that outshine the torment that grief can sometimes bestow. It was when you unpieced my ardent woe that I knew my heart would keep yours divine. 10 syllables in each line Rhyme scheme: A-B-B-A Enclosed Rhyme - September, 2018 Poetry Contest Sponsor, Dear Heart Date: September 3rd, 2018

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Date: 10/2/2018 3:03:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent write , you never cease to amaze me ~
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Date: 10/1/2018 6:21:00 PM
Beautifully expressed, Laura! Congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/30/2018 1:49:00 PM
Luloo, congrats on your win for this beautiful poem of love. John
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Date: 9/29/2018 8:30:00 PM
Congratulations on having this beauty in first place Laura! : )
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Date: 9/29/2018 7:54:00 PM
Awesome win, Laura, congratulations
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Date: 9/29/2018 6:53:00 PM
Congrats on sharing your gold medal win, Laura.
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Date: 9/29/2018 6:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent win, Laura, with your beautifully expressed and exquisite poem. Sweet poetry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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