Satori

Rejoice the moment
                     with whomever is present,
                         change is a constant.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Wonderful wisdom this senryu is, Phil. Enlighten a brother willya ... what does the title "Satori" mean? It appears to be a Japanese word. Loved this poem though. Love and more love to you and yours.
Capitano Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 1:04 PM
Actually you already said it, the word is a zen Buddhist term for enlightenment or awakening. Thanks for your continued interest and support.
Pettit Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 6:32 AM
Words of wisdom good enough to put inside a fortune cookie. Nice write.
Capitano Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 6:46 AM
Thanks for your support.
Funk Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 9:53 AM
its as if I'm reading it from the universe! Thank you for the pleasant reminder!
Leachet Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 10:01 PM
Change happens all the time. Nothing is forever and that last line says it all. Well done!!
Leachet Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 11:09 PM
:D Yes you can call me "Tat". You are welcome :) I did not know that about Buddhist meditation, but you learn something new everyday!!
Capitano Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 7:19 AM
Thanks Tat (if I can call you that), impermanence is one of the first things you learn through Buddhist meditation (and it still may be the hardest to accept).
Turner Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 10:52 AM
That last line says it all, Phil. Live in the moment!
Green Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Such thoughtful and wise words Phil. reminds me of Stephen Stills, "Love the one your with". Nice one.
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