Satiated In Morning Sun

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                   A fushia in bloom
                          tempts a thirsty visitor
                                I sip my coffee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kapoor Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 7:55 AM
Beautiful Haiku and a lovely way to enjoy the sip of coffee. Great write my friend to enjoy fushia in bloom with coffee. Good luck for the contest with my best wishes and love...Ravindra..xx Carrie Richards
Knop Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 5:04 AM
This reminds me of sitting outside on the terrace and having a look to the garden in bloom when having afternoon coffee! Nicely written Haiku, Carrie! And thank you for your comments. Have a nice weekend...Love, Gert
Kendrick Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 4:39 PM
Great write that should do well in the contest...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
La France Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 3:14 PM
I love this, it takes me back, to me and my Mom, watching her garden and sipping our cafe..love constance
Culverhouse Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 12:36 PM
enjoyed--morning pleasures
Murphy Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 11:46 AM
very nice you write lovely haikus enjoyed tnanks for your always so kind comments have a great day faleshia
A   Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 9:48 AM
well done on the haiku, enjoyed,..p.d.
Kelly Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 9:14 AM
A perfect sunny morning , Haiku , Carrie . This IS a true haiku moment , so well done ...
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