Satiated

alluring, evocative, desire's velvet soul unlily-like reveals fierce, flaming bud swelling flower bursts, scintillating points love rests, dew filled cup Copyright, July 24, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Gry Christensen

Date: 7/27/2014 5:21:00 PM

This is lovely..........passion and serenity. Best of luck in the contest! Fingers crossed.

Faye Gibson
Date: 7/27/2014 6:36:00 PM

Thank you, Gry.

Steve Harris

Date: 7/26/2014 9:22:00 PM

Powerful imagery - I think I'll need a shower or a smoke after this one. Can't see how this one is not a winner!

Faye Gibson
Date: 7/27/2014 6:36:00 PM

We shall see, Steve. Thanks.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/26/2014 8:12:00 PM

Faye my friend.. :D your pen is so beautiful.. :D love it!!!! i was reviewing which contest I want to try :D .. :D superb!

Faye Gibson
Date: 7/26/2014 8:14:00 PM

Thank you, sweetie.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/26/2014 8:53:00 AM

yup yup the glory of euphemisms :) Light & Love

Faye Gibson
Date: 7/26/2014 8:04:00 PM

Thank you, Debbie.

Robert Nehls

Date: 7/26/2014 7:20:00 AM

This is so nice, Faye. Short, bet full of great images of love. Totally enjoyed it, my friend...... Robert.

Faye Gibson
Date: 7/26/2014 8:03:00 PM

Many, many thanks to you, Robert.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/25/2014 9:20:00 PM

Brilliant, especially the title and the last line, loved this!

Faye Gibson
Date: 7/26/2014 8:03:00 PM

Thank you, Arthur. I appreciate your comments very much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2014 9:03:00 PM

wow, the title itself almost says it all. Gosh, how will I measure up to one like this once I get started on this one? soupmail for you.

Faye Gibson
Date: 7/26/2014 8:02:00 PM

You will do superbly, Andrea; I have no doubts. Thanks for being so sweet.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/24/2014 3:03:00 PM

Your title...one of my favorite words. Very evocative piece, Faye....Good luck on the contest

Faye Gibson
Date: 7/26/2014 8:02:00 PM

Thank you, Eileen. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. I have really liked what I have read so far.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2014 2:46:00 PM

this is stunning hugs jan xx

Faye Gibson
Date: 7/26/2014 8:01:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. You are such an encourager.