Faye Gibson Poet Verse

Satiated

alluring, evocative, desire's velvet soul
unlily-like reveals fierce, flaming bud
swelling flower bursts, scintillating points
love rests,  dew filled cup

Copyright, July 24, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson

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Gry Christensen July 27, 2014 at 5:21 PM This is lovely..........passion and serenity. Best of luck in the contest! Fingers crossed. Faye Gibson July 27, 2014 at 6:36 PM Thank you, Gry.

Steve Harris July 26, 2014 at 9:22 PM Powerful imagery - I think I'll need a shower or a smoke after this one. Can't see how this one is not a winner! Faye Gibson July 27, 2014 at 6:36 PM We shall see, Steve. Thanks.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 26, 2014 at 8:12 PM Faye my friend.. :D your pen is so beautiful.. :D love it!!!! i was reviewing which contest I want to try :D .. :D superb! Faye Gibson July 26, 2014 at 8:14 PM Thank you, sweetie.

Debbie Guzzi July 26, 2014 at 8:53 AM yup yup the glory of euphemisms :) Light & Love Faye Gibson July 26, 2014 at 8:04 PM Thank you, Debbie.

Robert Nehls July 26, 2014 at 7:20 AM This is so nice, Faye. Short, bet full of great images of love. Totally enjoyed it, my friend...... Robert. Faye Gibson July 26, 2014 at 8:03 PM Many, many thanks to you, Robert.

Arthur Vaso July 25, 2014 at 9:20 PM Brilliant, especially the title and the last line, loved this! Faye Gibson July 26, 2014 at 8:03 PM Thank you, Arthur. I appreciate your comments very much.

Andrea Dietrich July 25, 2014 at 9:03 PM wow, the title itself almost says it all. Gosh, how will I measure up to one like this once I get started on this one? soupmail for you. Faye Gibson July 26, 2014 at 8:02 PM You will do superbly, Andrea; I have no doubts. Thanks for being so sweet.

Eileen Manassian July 24, 2014 at 3:03 PM Your title...one of my favorite words. Very evocative piece, Faye....Good luck on the contest Faye Gibson July 26, 2014 at 8:02 PM Thank you, Eileen. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. I have really liked what I have read so far.

Jan Allison July 24, 2014 at 2:46 PM this is stunning hugs jan xx Faye Gibson July 26, 2014 at 8:01 PM Thank you, Jan. You are such an encourager.