Satellite

before time was time
throughout all eternity
you were always there

sending out signals
waiting, patiently waiting
for me to recieve…


Inspired by the song 'Ripple' by the Greatful Dead

'It's a hand-me-down
The thoughts are broken
Perhaps they're better left unsung
I don't know, don't really care
Let their be songs to fill the air'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 28, 2013 at 4:29 PM
Very good write! I really liked it- Heater
Neels Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 12:43 PM
Tim, this has got a lyrical feel to it, or maybe its just me? How are you doing? Hope the week has been kind to you. ;) smiles and hugs me
Chircop Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 9:12 AM
Nice one..I enjoy reading your poems Tim and its been quite a while..: )Quite a few yrs actually.Very creative.
Sanders Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 4:15 AM
Your right songs help deliver a certain poetic life tag maybe thats way we love music so much great poem poet.
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 3:47 PM
this is wonderful, Tim, and to answer your question< i was in Hayward. A horrible place to raise kids. We got out just in time i think!! (it was 1990 when we left)
Tacito Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 8:06 AM
Fantastic! Tremendous inspiration too. There's a song from Rise Against called "Satellite". It's a great song.
Mckenzie Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 7:01 AM
great words! Laura :)
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