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Satellite

At the center of my orbit,
You were Jupiter, huge, remote,
Surface roiled by raging storms.
I was a dim, distant moon --
A tiny ice-bound clod
Eternally held at bay --
Still, snared inescapably
By your awful gravity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Ashford Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 12:25 PM
Well poemed Leo, right on target, and strong theme.
Zzzzz Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 12:05 PM
Good, inventive write! Short, but strong!
Antwan Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 6:31 AM
once again, short and powerful. I like the metaphors of Jupiter and you being a moon. the gravity of this poem is profound.
Brown Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 5:16 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Leo. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Fiery Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 2:54 AM
I agree with Debra,,,we can relate life with this great piece by urs...I like ur imagination....power..
Sweetheart Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 8:54 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
Squyres Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 3:11 PM
From the Satellite's perspective, nicely done!! Relates to things in life too at times. Enjoyed !!
Guzzi Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 1:52 PM
The heavens are ripe with poetic imagery. Light & Love
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