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Satan's Apple

Where Satan sat in Manhattan The people gathered to fatten But too much sin Can do one in So now they call it, "Manflatten"

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Date: 4/5/2021 7:49:00 AM
LOL I sometimes wonder how you find inspiration, Rico, and always manage to give us a laugh. "Manflatten" makes me think of an obese woman sitting on her thin mate... Love this! Hugs, Carolyn
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/6/2021 11:28:00 AM
Thanks, I wondered how my sister ever got pregnant! Aloha! Rico
Date: 4/4/2021 6:29:00 PM
Hello Rico ... a bit like where I live. Longwarry was renamed Bongwatty because of a certain drug - thanks again Rico - Lindsay
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Date: 4/7/2021 11:09:00 AM
And you responded by singing, "Baw Baw Black Sheep?" Aloha! Rico
Date: 4/4/2021 4:35:00 PM
This is great fun, Rico. :D
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Date: 4/3/2021 2:09:00 PM
even this manhattanite can smile at this one, rico!
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Date: 4/3/2021 11:54:00 AM
Good one Rico... Belle
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Date: 4/3/2021 11:39:00 AM
Quite the read!
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Date: 4/3/2021 11:18:00 AM
ha ha ha love your witty word play:-) hugs Jan xx
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