John Aaron Green Poet Free verse

Satan and Almighty God- Collab

You Suffocate Me with Darkness…

 ~Satan~

Lawless, deceiver

Perverting, accusing, murdering 

Fallen angel, ruler of darkness, marriage destroyer
 
You stalk, you lie, you destroy, you steal my loved ones’ joy

You are the real loser

 in 

The

 End

You permeate my life with prisms of warm sunshine… 

~Almighty God~

Rejuvenator, love illustrator, galaxy maker, poem saver 

Shepherding, protecting, sacrificing 

Prince of Peace, Sea-calmer, our best friend 

You came, you lived, you sacrificed your life 

You 

are

the

main event 

In Paradise… 

Our Lord

Written by John Aaron Green & Gwendolen Rix 
1-2-11
For Opposites Attract Collaboration Contest~Tracie Indigo Dream Weaver



John wrote the first half and believes that our poems will be inscribed into the streets of gold in Heaven which is referenced in the second half-- “poem saver”.  Gwendolen wrote the second half.  

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Debbie Duncan August 29, 2012 at 3:48 PM I love the way you wrote this ,,,, AWESOME " I see why this won ;}

Carol Sunshine Brown January 16, 2012 at 2:23 PM Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Opposites Attract" contest John. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2012 at 6:31 PM Just saw this at Gwen's place. She is such a cool lady and an awesome poet, and you two created a marvelous contrasting set here. I like how you formatted here with the short lines going down like a funnel. Congrats to you both!

Black Eyed Susan January 14, 2012 at 5:24 PM Glad to see this on the winner's list! a great collaboration. congrats on your win :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. January 13, 2012 at 2:28 PM Hi John! Like what I told Gwendolen, this is such a powerful collab, a great topic to write on and you put the contrast here so well! Congrats on your win :)

Nette Onclaud January 13, 2012 at 12:33 PM just goes to show two heads are better than one.. what a divine, sublime write, gwenie and aaron.. congrats with hugggs! :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 13, 2012 at 11:00 AM Congratulations on your joint win x

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 13, 2012 at 9:28 AM CONGRATS JOHN ON AN EXCELLENT WIN WITH GWENDOLEN.. TWO KINDRED SPIRITS COLLABORATING TO BRING A MESSAGE ABOUT OUR LOVING CREATOR AND THE "ENEMY" WE FIGHT DAILY.. EXCITING WORDS LUV..

Lucinda Cayton January 11, 2012 at 1:28 PM Thats depth in both! excellence. U know, you know see ya face to face..:)

Red Fiery January 10, 2012 at 10:32 AM this is such a WONDERFUL COLLAB..I KNOW JOHN IS A GREAT POET AND A GREAT HUMAN BEIGN TOO...I WISH U ALL THE BEST FOR THIS CONTEST....CHEERS !

Black Eyed Susan January 10, 2012 at 6:37 AM As I said to Nikko, very impressive write! you guys are a force to be reckoned with for this contest! btw, I like your descriptions so much that I couldn't even pick a favorite line. good luck in the contest :)

Toshia Hall January 8, 2012 at 8:48 PM This was beautiful...so dark in the beginning and then you two allowed Gods brilliant light to shine! Wonderful colab!! :) luv Tosh

Debra Squyres January 8, 2012 at 12:17 PM Two extremes of our universe...Very good collab !!! Enjoyed !!!

Cory Long January 7, 2012 at 4:02 PM this was beautiful good luck in the contest. cory

Michael J. Falotico January 7, 2012 at 6:16 AM What a great collab from 2 of the soups most talented poets... Very enjoyed.. Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 6, 2012 at 11:21 PM AH THE NEVER ENDING BATTLE AND STRUGGLE OF DARKNESS AND LIGHT.. AMAZING JOHN AND THANKXX FOR WONDERFUL WORDS TO ME DURING MY DARK HOURS ...HIS LIGHT IS STRONGER .. WE ARE MORE THAN CONQUERORS LUV..

Poet Destroyer A January 6, 2012 at 9:30 PM wow!John... you and RIX... are truly awesome... and she is a very good poet... and has my support.... Now i envy her...lol.... I have over 40 collaborations with poets on the soup.... and have none with you...lol... what do you say...I need some writing inspiration... i love both verses here... always,..p.d.

Gwendolen Song January 5, 2012 at 4:04 PM Great comments from Soupers on your first collab. Congrats on that alone!! You love the Lord and His fingerprints are all over your poetry. Never stop writing. I will be away for a week maybe 2. Gotta judge my limerick contest and get organized for the New Yr. All the best. Gwendolen

Elizabeth Wesley January 4, 2012 at 6:32 PM The two of you are a force to be reckoned with! Both parts are full of amazing energy and of course you nail the truth down to perfection. P S Thanks for wandering about in my old poems John, your sweet comments are so much appreciated. :)

Wilma Neels January 4, 2012 at 6:55 AM This is an absolute stunner John and Gwendolen, wish you guys all the best for the contest.. love the topic you guys has chosen!! Hope to see it on the winner's list ;) Wilma

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2012 at 11:00 PM Hey, I read this about an hour ago over at Gwen's place. It rocks!! I think you will score with this one, John. Great idea you guys came up with!

Dan Kearley January 3, 2012 at 4:14 PM You two did an awesome job here!Very nice,very nice! :-)

Gwendolen Song January 3, 2012 at 4:12 PM Hey hey John Aaron...you are a delightful individual and a gifted poet...let's do another one of these in the future! I think u and I have found a treasured topic!! Gwendolen