Sartt

Photo slides amber fed
Mits and gaze
Black and red
Undeveloped 
Painted skepp
Lies undeveloped

feelingsblitz

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Cherl Dunn

November 23, 2014 at 6:33 PM

Hello Jerry I have to agree with Andrea, I don't know some of these terms, but it has great engery of spirit, and is very discriptive, cheri also thank you for your comment also on my work, glad you enjoyed it so much cheri

Andrea Dietrich

November 22, 2014 at 8:03 PM

A few of the words are lingo I am not familiar with but I enjoy the brevity and the way you "developed " this one!!!

Jerry T Curtis

November 23, 2014 at 6:26 AM

Thanks Andrea , You have the heart of a true artist , demonstrated by your many contest wins. Your comment demonstrates, that you possess the particular gift of insightfulness. That understanding a poem or a painting, isn't as important than the feeling one derives from it. Thanks again

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