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Sari Finesse

Chandelier earrings dangling Golden bangles jingling Thick long raven hair Twisted and pinned in swirls With ornate gold embellishment Luxuriously wrapped In silk and brocade Lavish lengths Of rich flamboyant colors Parading effortlessly Their exotic saris Swaying in graceful rhythm Gliding by on air In exquisite hues And charms of opulence Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~NAMASTE~ 2020 AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on June 17, 2019 for contest YOUR CHOICE (10) IMAGIST STYLE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 3RD Originally posted on May 7, 2019

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Susan Ashley

Date: 6/24/2019 9:11:00 PM

Beautiful and captivating imagery, Line. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/24/2019 9:14:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. Most appreciated.

Kenneth Brenner

Date: 6/24/2019 3:51:00 AM

Line, I will always enjoy reading your works..they have so much class..Congrats on hi mark..Keep the pen rolling. :-)

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/24/2019 5:27:00 AM

Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, Kenneth. Most appreciated.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/21/2019 2:40:00 PM

A beautiful picture you have painted with your words. Congrats on the placement.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2019 2:43:00 PM

Thanks, Jeanne, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.

L. J. Carber

Date: 6/21/2019 9:15:00 AM

Nicely done Line--congrats!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2019 2:42:00 PM

Thank you, LJ. Much appreciated.

Debjani Mitra

Date: 5/9/2019 9:28:00 PM

Such a pretty ode to a women in sari, ... me an Indian, i wear saris mostly. You have used beautiful words and given poetic feminine touch to a six yard piece of cloth. Loved it friend.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/9/2019 10:28:00 PM

I love saris.They are so elegant and graceful. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Debjani.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/9/2019 4:18:00 AM

"fav"...great visual on this one.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/9/2019 8:21:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely compliment, ML.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 5/8/2019 10:02:00 PM

Fab! Another FAV for me. Your creative juices are flowing today.... I imagine this beautiful woman turning all heads in the room.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/8/2019 10:04:00 PM

Thank you so much for your wonderful compliment, Timothy.

W.A. Cholt

Date: 5/8/2019 7:00:00 PM

Wonderful, when poetry flows like this. Lovely, fluid, vivid descriptions. A joy to read.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/8/2019 8:47:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely compliment, WA. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/8/2019 11:16:00 AM

I am thinking of the beautiful world of India; and the Taj Mahal, and the exotic colors! Your imagery makes it real.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/8/2019 11:45:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. Gotta love those beautiful colorful and exotic saris.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/7/2019 11:11:00 PM

Very pretty!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/8/2019 8:25:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/7/2019 8:48:00 PM

Ooooh-la-la! Such a vivid description. Street scene come alive! (Takes me right to the Indian neighborhood's commercial strip, a mere 3/4 mile from my home). Bring on the Sari Palaces and Ghandi Electronics! Nicely done, Line. :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2019 9:07:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.