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Sari Finesse

Chandelier earrings dangling
Golden bangles jingling
Thick long raven hair
Twisted and pinned in swirls
With ornate gold embellishment
Luxuriously wrapped
In silk and brocade
Lavish lengths 
Of rich flamboyant colors
Parading effortlessly
Their exotic saris
Swaying in graceful rhythm 
Gliding by on air
In exquisite hues 
And charms of opulence



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~NAMASTE~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on June 17, 2019 for contest YOUR CHOICE (10) IMAGIST STYLE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 3RD

Originally posted on May 7, 2019

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2019

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Susan Ashley Date: 6/24/2019 9:11:00 PM Beautiful and captivating imagery, Line. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/24/2019 9:14:00 PM Thank you, Susan. Most appreciated.

Kenneth Brenner Date: 6/24/2019 3:51:00 AM Line, I will always enjoy reading your works..they have so much class..Congrats on hi mark..Keep the pen rolling. :-) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/24/2019 5:27:00 AM Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, Kenneth. Most appreciated.

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 6/21/2019 2:40:00 PM A beautiful picture you have painted with your words. Congrats on the placement. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/21/2019 2:43:00 PM Thanks, Jeanne, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.

L. J. Carber Date: 6/21/2019 9:15:00 AM Nicely done Line--congrats! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/21/2019 2:42:00 PM Thank you, LJ. Much appreciated.

Debjani Mitra Date: 5/9/2019 9:28:00 PM Such a pretty ode to a women in sari, ... me an Indian, i wear saris mostly. You have used beautiful words and given poetic feminine touch to a six yard piece of cloth. Loved it friend. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/9/2019 10:28:00 PM I love saris.They are so elegant and graceful. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Debjani.

M. L. Kiser Date: 5/9/2019 4:18:00 AM "fav"...great visual on this one. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/9/2019 8:21:00 AM Thanks for the lovely compliment, ML.

Timothy Mcguire Date: 5/8/2019 10:02:00 PM Fab! Another FAV for me. Your creative juices are flowing today.... I imagine this beautiful woman turning all heads in the room. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/8/2019 10:04:00 PM Thank you so much for your wonderful compliment, Timothy.

W.A. Cholt Date: 5/8/2019 7:00:00 PM Wonderful, when poetry flows like this. Lovely, fluid, vivid descriptions. A joy to read. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/8/2019 8:47:00 PM Thank you so much for your lovely compliment, WA. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 5/8/2019 11:16:00 AM I am thinking of the beautiful world of India; and the Taj Mahal, and the exotic colors! Your imagery makes it real. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/8/2019 11:45:00 AM Thanks, Caren. Gotta love those beautiful colorful and exotic saris.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/7/2019 11:11:00 PM Very pretty! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/8/2019 8:25:00 AM Thank you, Kim. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf Date: 5/7/2019 8:48:00 PM Ooooh-la-la! Such a vivid description. Street scene come alive! (Takes me right to the Indian neighborhood's commercial strip, a mere 3/4 mile from my home). Bring on the Sari Palaces and Ghandi Electronics! Nicely done, Line. :) gw Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/7/2019 9:07:00 PM Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.