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SARI FINESSE

Chandelier earrings dangling Golden bangles jingling Thick long raven hair Twisted and pinned in swirls With ornate gold embellishment Luxuriously wrapped In silk and brocade Lavish lengths Of rich flamboyant colors Parading effortlessly Their exotic saris Swaying in graceful rhythm Gliding by on air In exquisite hues And charms of opulence Submitted on June 17, 2019, for contest YOUR CHOICE (10) IMAGIST STYLE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 3RD Originally posted on May 7, 2019

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Date: 6/24/2019 9:11:00 PM
Beautiful and captivating imagery, Line. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/24/2019 9:14:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/24/2019 3:51:00 AM
Line, I will always enjoy reading your works..they have so much class..Congrats on hi mark..Keep the pen rolling. :-)
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Date: 6/24/2019 5:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, Kenneth. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/21/2019 2:40:00 PM
A beautiful picture you have painted with your words. Congrats on the placement.
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Date: 6/21/2019 2:43:00 PM
Thanks, Jeanne, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.
Date: 6/21/2019 9:15:00 AM
Nicely done Line--congrats!
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Date: 6/21/2019 2:42:00 PM
Thank you, LJ. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/9/2019 9:28:00 PM
Such a pretty ode to a women in sari, ... me an Indian, i wear saris mostly. You have used beautiful words and given poetic feminine touch to a six yard piece of cloth. Loved it friend.
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Date: 5/9/2019 10:28:00 PM
I love saris.They are so elegant and graceful. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Debjani.
Date: 5/9/2019 4:18:00 AM
"fav"...great visual on this one.
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Date: 5/9/2019 8:21:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely compliment, ML.
Date: 5/8/2019 10:02:00 PM
Fab! Another FAV for me. Your creative juices are flowing today.... I imagine this beautiful woman turning all heads in the room.
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Date: 5/8/2019 10:04:00 PM
Thank you so much for your wonderful compliment, Timothy.
Date: 5/8/2019 7:00:00 PM
Wonderful, when poetry flows like this. Lovely, fluid, vivid descriptions. A joy to read.
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Date: 5/8/2019 8:47:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely compliment, WA. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/8/2019 11:16:00 AM
I am thinking of the beautiful world of India; and the Taj Mahal, and the exotic colors! Your imagery makes it real.
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Date: 5/8/2019 11:45:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. Gotta love those beautiful colorful and exotic saris.
Date: 5/7/2019 11:11:00 PM
Very pretty!
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Date: 5/8/2019 8:25:00 AM
Thank you, Kim. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/7/2019 8:48:00 PM
Ooooh-la-la! Such a vivid description. Street scene come alive! (Takes me right to the Indian neighborhood's commercial strip, a mere 3/4 mile from my home). Bring on the Sari Palaces and Ghandi Electronics! Nicely done, Line. :) gw
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Date: 5/7/2019 9:07:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.