Vince Suzadail Jr. Poet Couplet

Sarcastic

I was told I was sarcastic
But I’m not made from plastic
So I’ll say it clear and loud
Of the sarcasm I am proud
I wouldn’t be so contrite
If we did things freakin’ right
While working with eyes shut
And our nose up someone’s butt.
How could I possibly be sarcastic
When everything seems so drastic
My sarcasm is through frustration
Guess where I get my inspiration
Sarcastic? How could that be
I’m just describing what I see
Everyday I feel more dazed
But I’m also totally amazed
My headaches keep accruing
Does anyone know what they’re doing
Did I leave my mind back there
I’ve seemed to lost it somewhere
I promise I’ll watch what I say
If I see something right someday.

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Michelle Mac Donald December 31, 2008 at 8:41 AM Happy New Year, Vince!! Sarcasm feels to be alright. Certainly more easily heard and intergrated than a shout, or a bonk on the snout? Wonderfully done, Vince!:) Blessing to you and yours...Mikki

Mc Mc December 31, 2008 at 3:11 AM Everyday I feel more dazed But I’m also totally amazed love the poem and these lines- all the best- thanks, Vince!!

Brian Strand December 29, 2008 at 1:32 AM Decorated with wit sarcasm can be amusing observation on life Vince.Rgds Brian & thanks for your supporet to my blogs etc in 2008.

Farah Chamma December 28, 2008 at 3:02 PM I like this piece a lot...it's like you're talking directly to us, me as a reader :) I find sarcasm a cure to bad days! Thanks for sharing..farah

Deneen White December 25, 2008 at 4:02 PM hi Vince, this write screams to what you are feeling, just take things in stride, we write what we are, and how we feel, and if it hits someone the wrong way, or they don't raed us the cprrect way, then it is still okay, thanks for your comments, and never apologize for the way that you may feel, take care D-nyce

Sara Zahed December 25, 2008 at 12:51 AM Well what is our other option if nothing we see is right and then people complain, but nothing happens? :S Sarcasm sometimes is a relief for it helps us share a laugh instead of sitting around with grumpy faces =D Thank you for the warm comments...tc...Sara...

Lawrence Ingle December 24, 2008 at 8:28 PM I can't quit laughing man...Great work..great way of putting it...You haven't said nothing that we all don't feel quite often..Love it...Lawrence in Lou...still laughing

Robin L. Gass December 23, 2008 at 9:35 PM I can relate to this great write. You said it so well! Thanks for your comment and Merry Christmas to you and yours. Love Robin

Daver Austin December 16, 2008 at 8:42 AM I had a thought....I wonder what Vince Suzadail is doing? Same old Vince. I'm kinda sarcastic myself, so I love your stuff. No humbug now, Vince. Have a merry Christmas. Love. daver

Leonard Taormina December 12, 2008 at 7:52 PM Vince; I doubt anyone knows where they're going or doing for that matter. "Some people think they found the way, but they're a dime a dozen, you see them everyday." (A line from a song by a group called Savoy Brown)

Heidie Buys December 12, 2008 at 8:42 AM You? Sarcastic? Noooo! Love this , well said. Love Heidie

Autumn Rose Wood December 12, 2008 at 7:52 AM Nothing wrong with your insight or your voice. I think you already know that. Keep writing, you do it so well. Couplet is a hard form, at least for me, but you are an expert. I always enjoy reading your work. Thanks!

James Faulkner December 11, 2008 at 7:25 PM i love this poem. idefinatly can relate. thanks for the great write once again

John Loving Iii December 11, 2008 at 1:20 PM this to me is far from being sarcastic. jhl

Sharon Winter December 11, 2008 at 12:54 PM You should be proud of your sarcasm - we are! Seems like it is one thing after another. How can we live without it's dark humor? Better to be sarcastic then bombastic - well, it rhymes. Yes, I've got the headaches, too. Great poem. Feels like we've all just about had it. Hang in there. Love, Shar

Michael Torres December 11, 2008 at 10:21 AM my heart these days. I have to I have a seventeen year old daughter lol.Im still human Vince and I am no different then you. Vince I havent started reading your fine poem's just trying to keep up making comments is hard enough. One of these days Im going to catch up. GBU and the ones you love. And I loved this write. Michael

Michael Torres December 11, 2008 at 10:18 AM lol Vince this is great. So true. I guess patience brings knowledge. Sometimes we are human and our emotions get the better of us. But Vince you are an educated man with a caring heart and I know that for you to be sarcastic someone must have done something terribly wrong. Anger cause us to die earlier bring our imune system down and many negative things. I know I was the way your describing until I gave up my life for christ and even know it flares up from time to time but I have more love in

Christopher Higgins December 11, 2008 at 8:31 AM Have they been reading your poetry at work? If they had read some of this pieces you have written they would have figured out what I realized from one reading. lol.. I always thought that your words lightened the mood. Keep the tongue rolling so that it can shine a light on their lives.

Carrie Richards December 11, 2008 at 8:15 AM I'm printing this one out for my hubby..! I thought he was the champ of sarcasm...perhaps he has been outdone by the master! Stand proud...you are the king of sarcasm!! My laugh for today!! :) ....Love Carrie

Amy Swanson December 11, 2008 at 7:33 AM *giggle* I got a laugh out of this one, great writing! LOL My husband would really love this, he gets accused of the same thing. The good thing about sarcasm though, is it keeps us real. One thing you can count on from my husband is the truth, he calls it like he sees it and doesn't back down, while others are candy coating he is bring it back to reality, keeps everyone balanced! :) Loved it. Your friend, Amy :)

Wilfredo Derequito December 11, 2008 at 6:45 AM But at the rate things are going on all around the world, Vince, I'm afraid you will wait eons before you wake up to a day when you - and everybody else for that matter - will finally be able to stop and watch what you say. No, I'm not being sarcastic, just realistic. Regards, Fred