Sara's Second Haiku

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I went out and poured some warm water into the bath..They came back and drank..

Sara

fresh bird seed placed in
the bird feeders..
red cardinals fight

cardinals eat their 
fill, fly down to the bird bath...
frozen water question 

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Ajayi Angel-Simon

Date: 11/27/2012 9:27:00 AM

Good one Sara! You indulged the nature part of Me. Angel

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/26/2012 4:57:00 AM

Well, I would think you are pretty seasoned writing these things. Both are quite wonderful to read.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/25/2012 10:07:00 PM

This write is truly a phenomenal write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and terrific poem this evening! I've fallen behind in my comments to everybody! I've had a lot of schoolwork and family time that I've had to deal with! This is a fabulous and fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/25/2012 9:49:00 PM

Sara, my favorite bird will be the Cardinal.. I've only seen a few my entire life,,, every time i see one I get excited like a little kid.... love the haiku...pd

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 11/25/2012 4:22:00 PM

Amazing Haikus Sara - aesthetically carved. Thanks for admiring the meaning of my Haiku. I am glad I have been able to convey my thoughts in a seventeen syllable poem. Have a nice day. -Mohammad