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Sara's Alarm Clock

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May be an image of rat, slow loris and text that says 'Sara's Alarm Clock Beddy bye beddy bye cuddled up in here lie Tickity tickity tock-tock goes the alarm clock! With a blanky on my tummy Ifeel kinda' woozy Dingy dingy dong-dong, wanka wanka By: Mystic Rose am cozy Beddy bye beddy bye, / think ? sleep til' noonzy!'

Beddy bye beddy bye cuddled up in here I lie Tickity tickity tock-tock goes the alarm clock With a blanky on my tummy I feel kinda' woozy Dingy dingy dong-dong, anka wanka I am cozy Beddy bye beddy bye think I'll sleep til' noonzy!

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/25/2025 9:28:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun/cute/wonderful write. Pretty Picture... Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..............

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/25/2025 6:43:00 AM

Oh Rose, this was pure bedtime bliss! I could hear the tick-tock lullaby and feel the gentle whimsy of your cozy, cuddled-up world. There’s a childlike magic in your rhythm and so playful and soothing, like a warm hug wrapped in rhyme. Summer Blessings, My Dear Rose, Daniel

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 7/24/2025 7:33:00 PM

Humorous ! Enjoyable to read time and again

Sara Baker

Date: 7/24/2025 5:38:00 PM

such a sweet and creative write. I'm grateful you used the picture I posted. You did a great job; your poem matches the picture perfectly. hugs & enjoy your evening, sara

David Crandall

Date: 7/24/2025 3:30:00 PM

Cute one!