Mystic Rose Rose Poet Rhyme

Sara's Alarm Clock

Beddy bye beddy bye
cuddled up in here I lie 
Tickity tickity tock-tock
goes the alarm clock

 
With a blanky on my tummy
I feel kinda' woozy
Dingy dingy dong-dong,
anka  wanka I am cozy

  
Beddy bye beddy bye 
think I'll sleep til' noonzy!

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Paula Goldsmith July 25, 2025 at 9:28 AM I enjoyed reading your fun/cute/wonderful write. Pretty Picture... Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..............

Daniel Henry Rodgers July 25, 2025 at 6:43 AM Oh Rose, this was pure bedtime bliss! I could hear the tick-tock lullaby and feel the gentle whimsy of your cozy, cuddled-up world. There’s a childlike magic in your rhythm and so playful and soothing, like a warm hug wrapped in rhyme. Summer Blessings, My Dear Rose, Daniel

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh July 24, 2025 at 7:33 PM Humorous ! Enjoyable to read time and again

sara Etgen-Baker July 24, 2025 at 5:38 PM such a sweet and creative write. I'm grateful you used the picture I posted. You did a great job; your poem matches the picture perfectly. hugs & enjoy your evening, sara

David Crandall July 24, 2025 at 3:30 PM Cute one!