Sarah's Bath Time

Altering her worldly reflection
Vanity clouding her perception
Sarah bathes in self deception

By Robb A. Kopp

For Constance La Frances contest: Reflection
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 7:13 AM
A unique way to see it. If for the contest, Robb, read her directions. I think you need to use the name of the girl Sarah in your title for it to be accepted. Luv, Andrea
Quintero Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 3:44 PM
Love it!
Montgomery Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 8:29 AM
A lot of truth in those lines!!
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