Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Senryu

" Sara "

1 " Very thought Provoking "
     " Am I too old to " ( give ) " help? ( Sara Kendrick )
            ( " MIATIANNA " )   

   2  Rebirth and rebuild
       In the Square , the music Speaks
       Honoring : the Dead         ( HG )

       Dedicated to  the ( "Flowing Pen" ) " Sara Kendrick "

       Author's Note :  The First two Lines of the First Senryu are Sara's Words
                        In a Comment on my POEM " MIATIANNA "

                              The Second Senryu is my Response

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Doris Culverhouse February 10, 2010 at 5:18 AM Thanks for your wonderful tribute to my mom. I bet her head is swelling. I am up today because I have to get my son ready for school and I also had a bad dream that woke me at 5am and then the wind was about to blow the house down. LOL God was trying to keep me from gettig stiff this am.

Sara Kendrick February 2, 2010 at 3:41 AM Thanks for the honor and tribute --a poem with my name. I'll have to read all your honor poems. Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 30, 2010 at 10:33 PM Hati was a horrible disaster... These senryu are an imaginative interactive way to handle your thoughts. Very nice. (Did you ever notice that I have reposted Elephant Dandruff for you. I used to cull out poems when I had written a hundred leaving only contest and featured poems... That is why you were unable to find it.) Love to you. Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich January 30, 2010 at 5:23 PM I love your response here! These all make mine look quite dull. haha

Charmaine Chircop January 30, 2010 at 3:08 AM Sara Kendrick,a sensitive person,a mother to all,She can help with prayers,we can help with donations and stuff,,and i love your response to Her indeed..Charma

Carolyn Devonshire January 29, 2010 at 9:59 PM None of us are too old to offer help, HG. And your poem Miatianna inspired all of us to do everything we can, even if our help is limited to prayers. Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno January 29, 2010 at 9:00 PM The Flowing Pen has been very creative today, your soul is limitless in creating...Raul