Ink Empress Poet Haiku

sapphire storms hiku

skies of sapphire  s
                         t o
                     r   m   s 
s u s 
    p 
   e n 
        d 
       e  d in bruised glass blues ~ 
the greying grief    g l 
                           i     n 
                               t
                               s 

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Justin Bordner May 22, 2025 at 4:58 PM I like the rich deep color and volatile texture of this piece Poetess....J.A.B.

JC Brul May 21, 2025 at 6:18 PM What a cinematic view! You captured so vividly with eloquence in just few words. Congratulations dear Ink. This is definitely a FAVE! Stay creative! ^__^

Andrea Dietrich May 21, 2025 at 4:43 PM Cool patterning, Constance. You are doing great with these wins. Congrats

Paige Hind May 21, 2025 at 1:58 PM I always anticipate your haikus, dear Ink. This one is beautiful and made my heart ache. <3

Sara Kendrick May 21, 2025 at 3:19 AM Interesting. We have had cloudy, dark skies with thunderbolts to light up the sky and pouring rain. I think it could be over now though. soupmail. Sara K Ink Empress May 21, 2025 at 7:31 AM Ah we had the same dear sara, thunderstorms , im not a fan of those. Thank you always for being so kind and supportive

Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2025 at 1:09 AM - Beautifully written, Ink :) - hugs Ink Empress May 21, 2025 at 7:08 AM Thank you so very much dear anne lise/ sending you light always

Anne Winter May 20, 2025 at 7:51 PM Dear I E, The imagery is beautiful, and the way you've woven together 'skies of sapphire' with 'storms suspended in bruised glass' creates a powerful contrast. I appreciate the artistry that went into crafting this haiku! Best, Anne Ink Empress May 21, 2025 at 7:07 AM Its always a pleasure hearin from you dear anne! Thank you for your kind comment and for your encouragement. Im beyond grateful! Sending you light always

Sotto Poet May 20, 2025 at 7:12 PM Wow, This evokes a mind or soul where beauty and violence coexist — perhaps the emotional tension before a breakdown or the stunning power of internal pain. I hope you're doing well dear Ink. I see that you're not very active lately and of course we miss your wonderful creation Ink Empress May 21, 2025 at 6:56 AM Yes i try to take breaks sometimes dr sotto how thoughtful of you to notice that! I appreciate it very much! Thank you for being so kind! Sending you light always

I Am Anaya May 20, 2025 at 2:59 PM Whoa hope you are doing well, Empress, wishing you happiness ~ Ink Empress May 21, 2025 at 6:55 AM Ahww i am content, its just as i said to tom below inspired by the weather and also prompts given by the queen of darkness ( sara) sending you light always

Jan Allison May 20, 2025 at 2:53 PM wow this is unlike any hiku I have ever seen before Ink, love the way you have structured it! hugs jan xx Ink Empress May 21, 2025 at 6:54 AM Thank you so much dear Jan, i always appreciate your kind support, sending you light always

Zyrool Gifford May 20, 2025 at 2:05 PM Hello Ink, this is a bit sad but beautifully penned. Enjoy your week my friend. Ink Empress May 21, 2025 at 6:53 AM Awwn yes weather can be gloomy at times. Especially when we personify them: thank you so much poetic soul

The Aura Rhymes May 20, 2025 at 1:00 PM As always a nice write Ink Empress May 21, 2025 at 6:49 AM Thank you dahlin

Lioness Onpaper May 20, 2025 at 12:09 PM Ooo sky of sapphires.. absolutely gorgeous… bruised glass blues .. stunning imagary .. love this haiku papi Ink Empress May 21, 2025 at 6:47 AM Thank you papi! Appreciate always your comments