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sapphire storms hiku

skies of sapphire  s
                         t o
                     r   m   s 
s u s 
    p 
   e n 
        d 
       e  d in bruised glass blues ~ 
the greying grief    g l 
                           i     n 
                               t
                               s

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Justin Bordner

Date: 5/22/2025 4:58:00 PM

I like the rich deep color and volatile texture of this piece Poetess....J.A.B.

JCB Brul

Date: 5/21/2025 6:18:00 PM

What a cinematic view! You captured so vividly with eloquence in just few words. Congratulations dear Ink. This is definitely a FAVE! Stay creative! ^__^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2025 4:43:00 PM

Cool patterning, Constance. You are doing great with these wins. Congrats

Paige Hind

Date: 5/21/2025 1:58:00 PM

I always anticipate your haikus, dear Ink. This one is beautiful and made my heart ache. <3

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/21/2025 3:19:00 AM

Interesting. We have had cloudy, dark skies with thunderbolts to light up the sky and pouring rain. I think it could be over now though. soupmail. Sara K

Ink Empress
Date: 5/21/2025 7:31:00 AM

Ah we had the same dear sara, thunderstorms , im not a fan of those. Thank you always for being so kind and supportive

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2025 1:09:00 AM

- Beautifully written, Ink :) - hugs

Ink Empress
Date: 5/21/2025 7:08:00 AM

Thank you so very much dear anne lise/ sending you light always

Anne Winter

Date: 5/20/2025 7:51:00 PM

Dear I E, The imagery is beautiful, and the way you've woven together 'skies of sapphire' with 'storms suspended in bruised glass' creates a powerful contrast. I appreciate the artistry that went into crafting this haiku! Best, Anne

Ink Empress
Date: 5/21/2025 7:07:00 AM

Its always a pleasure hearin from you dear anne! Thank you for your kind comment and for your encouragement. Im beyond grateful! Sending you light always

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/20/2025 7:12:00 PM

Wow, This evokes a mind or soul where beauty and violence coexist — perhaps the emotional tension before a breakdown or the stunning power of internal pain. I hope you're doing well dear Ink. I see that you're not very active lately and of course we miss your wonderful creation

Ink Empress
Date: 5/21/2025 6:56:00 AM

Yes i try to take breaks sometimes dr sotto how thoughtful of you to notice that! I appreciate it very much! Thank you for being so kind! Sending you light always

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/20/2025 2:59:00 PM

Whoa hope you are doing well, Empress, wishing you happiness ~

Ink Empress
Date: 5/21/2025 6:55:00 AM

Ahww i am content, its just as i said to tom below inspired by the weather and also prompts given by the queen of darkness ( sara) sending you light always

Jan Allison

Date: 5/20/2025 2:53:00 PM

wow this is unlike any hiku I have ever seen before Ink, love the way you have structured it! hugs jan xx

Ink Empress
Date: 5/21/2025 6:54:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Jan, i always appreciate your kind support, sending you light always

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 5/20/2025 2:05:00 PM

Hello Ink, this is a bit sad but beautifully penned. Enjoy your week my friend.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/21/2025 6:53:00 AM

Awwn yes weather can be gloomy at times. Especially when we personify them: thank you so much poetic soul

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 5/20/2025 1:00:00 PM

As always a nice write

Ink Empress
Date: 5/21/2025 6:49:00 AM

Thank you dahlin

Tom Woody

Date: 5/20/2025 12:18:00 PM

Oof! This feels depressing though well written. Hope you're okay

Tom Woody
Date: 5/21/2025 7:23:00 AM

Glad just the weather :)

Ink Empress
Date: 5/21/2025 6:49:00 AM

It was inspired by the weather when i wrote this and also by a prompt given by sara " storm and grief " so had to be dark: thank you for your support