Sapphire Skies In Sanguine Eyes

In the absence of complication,
Trials and tribulations become distant memories.
Above sapphire skies delight sanguine eyes -
Inspiring forthcoming musings of the mind.

Hope of a brand-new day conquers
Disillusionments of the past
Hosting exuberance on resplendent arc,

Condemning the nights of angst
In triumphant adjudication
By the authority of a bright new dawn;
Leaving behind feelings of torments,
Emotions dispossessed, forsaken, and forlorn.

In the dread of winter, when he left her,
Beguiled by the aspirations of spring
He was her only poet laureate
Crafting her life’s laudable poetry.

She trusted him fully to write her songs.

But the man who charmed her piano keys,
As he was leaving, destroyed all the lyrics.

She is no fool in the world of romance--
Cognizant that a pretty rose has ugly thorns
And gentle winds yield to violent storms,

And marigold designs sprinkled on magenta
Mesmerizing eyes, in sight of sunrise,
Never come inspired to stay very long.

Yet, she’s moving on, enamored in new song,
Euphoric to answer call of her heart
For a new artist’s brush exalts her canvas--
Who sings her praises in verses of love
And paints her dreams in romantic themes.

Neither a blemish in her twilight skies
Nor a hint of clouds in her cosmic view
As the starlit evening wallows in full moon,
And a night of revelry scripted for two
Aspires to new horizons of sapphire hues.

November 20, 2019
Placed 1st: Complete the poem—in the absence of complication poetry contest
Sponsor: Silent One
Placed 3rd: Strand select P contest by Brian Strand
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Crabtree Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 12:04 PM
She was no fool. Well written, Vijay :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 5:56 PM
back with congrats. Way to go in Brian's contest, Vijay.
Kiser Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 4:27 PM
Vibrant imagery in this Vijay; beautiful and Congratulations!
Reid Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 8:38 AM
CONGRATULATIONS! BEAUTIFUL POEM. LOVE THE WORD PLAY AND WORDS CHOSEN.
Pandit Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 12:06 PM
Much appreciate--thank you Linda.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 2:54 PM
Congrats for being in the top 100 new poems! Well done.
Pandit Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 4:16 PM
Thank you Richard.
Ligon Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 9:53 AM
Great perspective, beautiful musings. Congrats!
Pandit Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 11:52 AM
Much appreciate Juliet--many thanks for your visit and comments.
B. Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 9:40 AM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay.. Breathtaking creativity, my friend.. You penned beauty, my friend.. Going right to my faves !! Many blessings!!
Pandit Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 11:19 AM
So happy to read your glowing feedback my friend--much appreciate--many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 3:02 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 3:52 PM
Much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 4:54 PM
Beautiful lines: He was her only poet laureate Crafting her life’s laudable poetry. Congratulations, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 3:51 PM
Thank you Kim--much appreciate.
Y. Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 4:03 PM
Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 3:51 PM
Much appreciate Alexis--many thanks.
Na Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 3:48 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Vijay
Pandit Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 3:50 PM
Thank you Gregory--much appreciate.
Sands Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 3:45 PM
Congratulations for your top win Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 3:50 PM
Thank you Heidi--much appreciate.
Adams Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 3:21 PM
back to say congratulations on your first place win...you aced this one my friend :) hugs
Pandit Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 3:49 PM
Much appreciate the return visit my friend--many thanks.
One Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 3:13 PM
This is why we cant trust anyone to write our songs... we must write them ourselves!!! so many brilliant lines throughout this poem... you really took to the theme brilliantly.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Pandit Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 3:49 PM
Thank you SO--much appreciate --always value your feedback.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 12:29 PM
Mesmerizing eyes, in sight of sunrise now that is truly a mirrored reflection beautifully painted in your pen vijay i pray you have a blessed weekend
Pandit Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 1:48 PM
Thank you Liam--much appreciate. A very good weekend to you, as well.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 8:42 AM
“She trusted him fully to write her songs.” My absolute favourite line. Tremendous piece my friend.
Pandit Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Much appreciate the kind remarks, Richard--many thanks.
There Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 1:15 AM
Quite a story you have shared here and so delicately. In the absence of complication, you have painted a world of hope and love. Love this, Vijay ~ a fave!
Pandit Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 7:15 AM
Much appreciate your kind remarks, HT--glad you liked the poem--many thanks. A special thank you for the FAVE.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 6:03 PM
Your lines mesh perfectly with his Vijay. This is a very beautiful sensitive piece that is sure to garner praise and a win! xxoo
Pandit Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 7:14 AM
Much appreciate your vote of confidence Connie--as always, I value your feedback--many thanks.
Proxenos Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 7:42 AM
A stunning poem Vijay - a poem full of meaning and thought - all your poems are so adorable - you are a lovable poet on soup and your poems are from your heart! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 7:14 AM
You are indeed very kind my friend--many thanks--much appreciate your comments.
May Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 2:32 PM
A new melody with her song of romance..Beautiful write Vijay
Pandit Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 7:15 AM
Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.
Y. Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 9:29 AM
WoW! Vijay, You did an amazing job completing Silent One's poem! In fact, I am in awe and of what you came up with. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great weekend my friend:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 7:15 AM
So glad to read your cheerful feedback my friend--much appreciate--many thanks, Alexis.
Nicole Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 11:35 PM
Oh my!! Your thoughts take my heart on an emotional journey. Once again, you move me with your words. I shall place this in my favorites. This is so beautiful and tender. Deep sigh. ~ Brandy
Pandit Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 6:49 AM
Appreciate reading your cheerful comments my friend--always a pleasure! Many thanks, Brandy. And a special thank you for the FAVE.
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 8:07 PM
your lines compliment his so well, Vijay. Also I liked how you took it to a story. That made it so interesting.
Pandit Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 6:47 AM
Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 1:22 PM
Winter and Spring.. nights and "bright new dawns".. "thorns and roses".. "winds and storms". death and rebirth.. Dualities, souls will ever enjoy and weather.. We learn to rise above aches and understand that we have many a chance to enjoy the bounties of life. to find souls that help build us. to sing "new songs of love" and "paint dreams" of different taste and colour. A standing ovation for the brilliant entry, dear Vijay! An amazing poem worthy of an outshining win! Definitely a FAV! Regards
Pandit Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 3:18 PM
That is so very kind of you--an inspirational feedback, Besma..many thanks..much appreciate your valued comments. And special thank you for the FAVE.
Canerdy Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 7:52 AM
First, let me say WOW! Vijay your addition to S.O.'s lines is beyond awesome! Your metaphors are vivid--superb. Janice
Pandit Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 3:17 PM
Much valued feedback you provided Janice--many thanks for the kind remarks.
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