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In sapphire skies dabbled with marshmallow clouds, a citrine sun shines like a precious jewel. And I rush to the beach to avoid the crowds, hoping to find a shady spot where it's cool. The humidity morphs into drops of sweat, and my entire body is soon sopping wet. But once I get there, it's not such a bummer, just a typical hot day in the summer. (Rispetto) 7/7/2018

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Date: 8/7/2018 4:09:00 PM
So cleverly and lightly expressed, Emile! Congrats on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 8/7/2018 4:54:00 PM
Thanks Gershon, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/7/2018 5:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Great summer imagery.
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Date: 8/7/2018 9:33:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/6/2018 2:28:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Emile, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/6/2018 8:13:00 AM
Thanks Eve, your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/20/2018 10:42:00 PM
Emile, your wonderful poem paints a beautifully hot and beachy summer scene. Well done! Best wishes for a win my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/21/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Susan, your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/17/2018 12:58:00 PM
Off to the beach - this is where I should be right now reading your fun-filled, summer poem! Excellent - shining bright and hot:-)! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 7/17/2018 2:34:00 PM
Thanks Pandita, your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/10/2018 10:56:00 AM
Well done, Emile. The summer theme sure comes through.
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Date: 7/10/2018 1:40:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments are truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/8/2018 11:34:00 AM
What a great summer poem Emile, i am not much of a beach fan but do walk by and watch other's having fun:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/8/2018 3:05:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate you comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/7/2018 10:26:00 PM
Emile.. love the pic and the poem!!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/8/2018 7:30:00 AM
Thank you Lyric Man, I appreciate you comments my friend, Emile.

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