Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

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Santa's New Bride

Mrs. Claus
Up and died 
She was tired

Santa looked 
Googly eyes
Twenty-fives

Santa wed
Died in bed
Really dead?  

I did syllable check and looked up lines one and nine. 
Mrs. has two syllables the way I pronounce it. I did a syllable checker online and it agrees. 
I pronounce really as real ly but the dictionary has it looking like three syllables but it is only pronounced as two.

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Paul Callus January 2, 2019 at 11:47 AM Quite an original take on the Christmas theme, Sara. Your final posers must await an answer which we will surely have in a year's time! Congratulations on your merited podium finish. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2019 at 11:59 PM - Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina January 1, 2019 at 1:11 PM Sara, I love this cute and fun Charlieku. The last line hit home and made me laugh out loud. Congratulations on your top win. Happy New Year! Charlie Sara Kendrick January 1, 2019 at 2:41 PM Charles, Thanks for dropping by and letting me know that I placed in the contest. I am glad I made you laugh as laughter is the best medicine. Sara

Nette Onclaud December 25, 2018 at 1:52 PM just thought of you, sara.. what are you cooking this christmas?... have a greeat one!..huggs Sara Kendrick December 25, 2018 at 3:35 PM Nette, We did bar-be-que this Christmas. We have done that several years now. I buy it from a store that does this every year as a money maker. I did some peanut brittle and some brownies. I have got where I am not able to do what I once did. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen December 24, 2018 at 7:54 AM - A wonderful poem, dear Sara - I send best wishes to you and your family for a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sara Kendrick December 24, 2018 at 9:37 AM SS, Thanks for the visit to my page. I hope that your Christmas is bright with an awesome year ahead. God bless and keep. Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu December 23, 2018 at 5:39 PM Hello Sara, this poem is cute. Merry Christmas. All the best for the New Year. Have a nice evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu December 30, 2018 at 2:39 PM I hope you had a good Christmas. Sara Kendrick December 24, 2018 at 7:04 AM Darlene, Thanks for the Christmas wishes. We are on the wind down. We will go see Karter and what he got for Christmas in the morning. Little ones add so much to a day. Sara

Kim Rodrigues December 21, 2018 at 12:49 PM I like that last line...really dead? Poor old fat fool...I say in jest! Sara Kendrick December 21, 2018 at 2:42 PM Kim, Yes, in jest jolly overweight Santa was acting foolishly. Your presence at my page is encouraging. Sara

Mystic Rose Rose December 21, 2018 at 6:27 AM Wishing you a Merry Christmas full of love, peace and health. Also, thank you for always commenting on my poems. Love xo Sara Kendrick December 21, 2018 at 2:41 PM PD, We all need a lot of love, peace and good health. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Nette Onclaud December 20, 2018 at 2:12 PM what a fun, unusual turn of events, sara... he must have just fainted from getting a young bride, lol... season's best...huggs Sara Kendrick December 21, 2018 at 2:40 PM Nette, I thought about this from some real life incident. Thanks for dropping by. Well, maybe he did faint. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire December 20, 2018 at 1:37 PM Oh, I think he'll come to life once more, Sara. Just needs a rest. Enjoyed your funny verses. If for Charlie's contest, sending winning wishes to you. Hugs, Carolyn Sara Kendrick December 21, 2018 at 12:14 PM Carolyn, Thanks for the visit to my page. I hope Santa wakes up in time for Christmas. Sara

James Peranteau December 19, 2018 at 11:09 PM Lol...love the exciting thought here dear poet....lol, the new Mrs. Claus doesn't look too excited! lol Have a jolly holiday and happy New year....much love, james Sara Kendrick December 20, 2018 at 6:04 AM James, Yes, the new bride looks a little unsure about the situation. Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting. Sara

Andrea Dietrich December 17, 2018 at 5:53 PM LOVE this set, Sara. I think he did not really die becuase he just keeps living on. Sara Kendrick December 18, 2018 at 5:17 AM Andrea, Maybe he was so rested he was barely getting his breath. LOL..Sara

Jan Allison December 17, 2018 at 3:38 PM oh so sad Sara but the picture is hilarious and made me think of a sugar daddy on his last legs -( hugs Jan xx Jan Allison December 25, 2018 at 2:05 PM lol:-) hugs Jan xx Sara Kendrick December 18, 2018 at 9:52 AM Jan, I thought about this one ..My father at age ninety-one was in the car with us going somewhere. He saw a man walking down the street and said, "Look at that old man walking straddled -legged for he has one leg in the gave and another on a banana peel.".Sara Sara Kendrick December 17, 2018 at 4:54 PM Jan, Yes, it sure does look like a sugar daddy on his last leg. LOL..Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent here..Sara

Constance La France December 17, 2018 at 8:28 AM Sara, oh poor Santa died for love, great haiku ! Sara Kendrick December 17, 2018 at 4:51 PM DH, Yes, Santa got his hopes up..That cheery old man tried to be young again. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Gary Bateman December 15, 2018 at 2:37 PM Hello Sara, This new Haiku of yours should be anointed as "The Haiku of the Year." The picture above relates perfectly to the verses. Really Dead, eh?? Love it. Superb Work!! A FAVE TOO!! Merry Christmas!! Gary Sara Kendrick December 16, 2018 at 5:15 AM Gary, Thanks for dropping by. Yes, Santa took on more than he could handle even though he is a mystical kind of man. I am honored that you faved it. Sara