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Mrs. Claus Up and died She was tired Santa looked Googly eyes Twenty-fives Santa wed Died in bed Really dead? I did syllable check and looked up lines one and nine. Mrs. has two syllables the way I pronounce it. I did a syllable checker online and it agrees. I pronounce really as real ly but the dictionary has it looking like three syllables but it is only pronounced as two.

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/2/2019 11:47:00 AM

Quite an original take on the Christmas theme, Sara. Your final posers must await an answer which we will surely have in a year's time! Congratulations on your merited podium finish. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2019 11:59:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/1/2019 1:11:00 PM

Sara, I love this cute and fun Charlieku. The last line hit home and made me laugh out loud. Congratulations on your top win. Happy New Year! Charlie

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/1/2019 2:41:00 PM

Charles, Thanks for dropping by and letting me know that I placed in the contest. I am glad I made you laugh as laughter is the best medicine. Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/25/2018 1:52:00 PM

just thought of you, sara.. what are you cooking this christmas?... have a greeat one!..huggs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/25/2018 3:35:00 PM

Nette, We did bar-be-que this Christmas. We have done that several years now. I buy it from a store that does this every year as a money maker. I did some peanut brittle and some brownies. I have got where I am not able to do what I once did. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/24/2018 7:54:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, dear Sara - I send best wishes to you and your family for a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/24/2018 9:37:00 AM

SS, Thanks for the visit to my page. I hope that your Christmas is bright with an awesome year ahead. God bless and keep. Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/23/2018 5:39:00 PM

Hello Sara, this poem is cute. Merry Christmas. All the best for the New Year. Have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/30/2018 2:39:00 PM

I hope you had a good Christmas.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/24/2018 7:04:00 AM

Darlene, Thanks for the Christmas wishes. We are on the wind down. We will go see Karter and what he got for Christmas in the morning. Little ones add so much to a day. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/21/2018 12:49:00 PM

I like that last line...really dead? Poor old fat fool...I say in jest!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/21/2018 2:42:00 PM

Kim, Yes, in jest jolly overweight Santa was acting foolishly. Your presence at my page is encouraging. Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/21/2018 6:27:00 AM

Wishing you a Merry Christmas full of love, peace and health. Also, thank you for always commenting on my poems. Love xo

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/21/2018 2:41:00 PM

PD, We all need a lot of love, peace and good health. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/20/2018 2:12:00 PM

what a fun, unusual turn of events, sara... he must have just fainted from getting a young bride, lol... season's best...huggs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/21/2018 2:40:00 PM

Nette, I thought about this from some real life incident. Thanks for dropping by. Well, maybe he did faint. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/20/2018 1:37:00 PM

Oh, I think he'll come to life once more, Sara. Just needs a rest. Enjoyed your funny verses. If for Charlie's contest, sending winning wishes to you. Hugs, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/21/2018 12:14:00 PM

Carolyn, Thanks for the visit to my page. I hope Santa wakes up in time for Christmas. Sara

James Peranteau

Date: 12/19/2018 11:09:00 PM

Lol...love the exciting thought here dear poet....lol, the new Mrs. Claus doesn't look too excited! lol Have a jolly holiday and happy New year....much love, james

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/20/2018 6:04:00 AM

James, Yes, the new bride looks a little unsure about the situation. Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/17/2018 5:53:00 PM

LOVE this set, Sara. I think he did not really die becuase he just keeps living on.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/18/2018 5:17:00 AM

Andrea, Maybe he was so rested he was barely getting his breath. LOL..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 12/17/2018 3:38:00 PM

oh so sad Sara but the picture is hilarious and made me think of a sugar daddy on his last legs -( hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 12/25/2018 2:05:00 PM

lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/18/2018 9:52:00 AM

Jan, I thought about this one ..My father at age ninety-one was in the car with us going somewhere. He saw a man walking down the street and said, "Look at that old man walking straddled -legged for he has one leg in the gave and another on a banana peel.".Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/17/2018 4:54:00 PM

Jan, Yes, it sure does look like a sugar daddy on his last leg. LOL..Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent here..Sara

Constance La France

Date: 12/17/2018 8:28:00 AM

Sara, oh poor Santa died for love, great haiku !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/17/2018 4:51:00 PM

DH, Yes, Santa got his hopes up..That cheery old man tried to be young again. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/15/2018 2:37:00 PM

Hello Sara, This new Haiku of yours should be anointed as "The Haiku of the Year." The picture above relates perfectly to the verses. Really Dead, eh?? Love it. Superb Work!! A FAVE TOO!! Merry Christmas!! Gary

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/16/2018 5:15:00 AM

Gary, Thanks for dropping by. Yes, Santa took on more than he could handle even though he is a mystical kind of man. I am honored that you faved it. Sara