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Santa's Hawaii Visit

Holiday Humor- Limerick Set Poetry Contest Tania Kitchin It's Christmas in Hawaii tomorrow And the blue skies be bright with a rainbow Santa gets in a grass skirt And a red Aloha shirt He makes his way from each home's patio He'll island hop a surfboard and skateboard And path his gifts free of all disaccord Perhaps stop at a luau And devour some native chow Santa's Hawaii trip was a reward When Santa returned home to the North Pole His starved reindeer met him with a drum roll To each of his dears a dish ... Hawaiian poi and fish His trip sans charcoal and snow leis role

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Date: 11/30/2024 7:27:00 AM
Here I am rereading this poem. And I can see how I can improve it. The last line-leis role, I should edit it to read-- leis low. Thats what Santa's doing when he visits Hawaii-leis low, having a good time. GS Connie. Think sometimes.
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Date: 11/22/2024 11:07:00 AM
A Santa tribute to Hawaii. Great job. Congrats.
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Date: 11/17/2024 12:00:00 PM
Connie, a fun and creative limerick set, congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 11/7/2024 8:54:00 PM
After reading this so funny and enjoyable write of yours Connie , I rather have my Christmas in Hawaii. Loved how you came up with this funny theme, you make me just want to fly out there just for Christmas. Love this one it is a favorite. Thanks for sharing and God bless you...
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Date: 11/7/2024 2:20:00 PM
Fun! An enjoyable Hawaiian sleigh ride! Good luck in the contest!
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