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Santa's Hawaii Visit

Holiday Humor- Limerick Set Poetry Contest
Tania Kitchin


It's Christmas in Hawaii tomorrow
And the blue skies be bright with a rainbow
Santa gets in a grass skirt
And a red Aloha shirt
He makes his way from each home's patio

He'll island hop a surfboard and skateboard
And path his gifts free of all disaccord
Perhaps stop at a luau
And  devour some native chow
Santa's Hawaii trip was a reward

When Santa returned home to the North Pole
His starved reindeer met him with a drum roll
To each of his dears a dish
... Hawaiian poi and fish
His trip sans charcoal and snow leis role

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 11/30/2024 7:27:00 AM
Here I am rereading this poem. And I can see how I can improve it. The last line-leis role, I should edit it to read-- leis low. Thats what Santa's doing when he visits Hawaii-leis low, having a good time. GS Connie. Think sometimes.
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Date: 11/22/2024 11:07:00 AM
A Santa tribute to Hawaii. Great job. Congrats.
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Date: 11/17/2024 12:00:00 PM
Connie, a fun and creative limerick set, congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 11/7/2024 8:54:00 PM
After reading this so funny and enjoyable write of yours Connie , I rather have my Christmas in Hawaii. Loved how you came up with this funny theme, you make me just want to fly out there just for Christmas. Love this one it is a favorite. Thanks for sharing and God bless you...
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Date: 11/7/2024 2:20:00 PM
Fun! An enjoyable Hawaiian sleigh ride! Good luck in the contest!
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