Santa Takes a Fall

''Ho ho ho' wheezed old Santa Claus
Wrapping around his head with gauze
He filled up with whisky 
Took behaviour risky 
And then fell foul of drinking laws  


16th December 2022 
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December 23, 2022 at 7:30 PM
Congratulations on your win, Julie. Many blessings and I wish you a Merry Christmas & a Happy New Year
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January 2, 2023 at 5:20 PM
That's very kind of you Eve, thank you. I wish the same for you!
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December 23, 2022 at 4:10 PM
Julie, a cute one, congratulations on your winning placement!
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January 2, 2023 at 5:19 PM
Thank you very much Tania. Merry Christmas and a happy new year to you!
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