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Santa Needs More Zoom

After last year slow night ride~after all the millions of miles, Santa's sled needed a check-up with smiles. Last year his sled went way too slow, it needed a ton of power with some more go~go. He wants to make sure all the good girls~boys, would get all of their many deserving toys. His mechanic worked many hours then said~take it for a ride, Santa whizzed through the sky then came back and cried. His sled now had power with plenty of Zoom, coming out the back of this sled was a huge fiery plume. Santa had his jolly big laugh, a million thanks to you and to your staff.

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Len Gasun

Date: 12/25/2023 11:25:00 PM

Belated congratulations on your win my dear poet friend Paula! This is a delightful, brilliant and funny Santa's story. Santa's sleigh was upgraded, he got a good mechanic. Enjoyed this so much from start to end giving me smiles. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/26/2023 8:01:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment and for your congratulations. Never toooooo late to say, congratulations. Glad you found my write to be delightful/brilliant/funny Santa's story/gave you smiles. That makes me very happy. I love to give out smiles. "Smiles" Hugs... Have a great/fun day writing away.....................

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 12/18/2023 6:28:00 PM

What a fun poem, Dear Paula! Enjoyed very much. Santa's sleigh must have a powerful engine - all the good boys and girls are waiting!!!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/19/2023 7:49:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you like my fun Santa write. The reindeer were happy for the extra zoom help. A very busy night will be here soon.... Have a great/fun holiday......................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/18/2023 8:18:00 AM

Hey, Paula!,! Woo Hoo..big Congratutions on winning! I had to come back. Santa is bringing you a special present for !your work, Pamgie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/19/2023 7:48:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment and for your congratulations. Glad you came back to read again my fun Santa write. That makes me very happy. Have a great/fun holiday......................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2023 1:29:00 PM

You did a GREAT job with this one, Paula. Much enjoyed.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2023 5:45:00 PM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you enjoyed my fun Santa write. Have a great/fun holiday.....................

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/13/2023 12:39:00 PM

Back with congratulations to you Paula, some great entries for Josephs contest, just reading them now. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/13/2023 8:05:00 PM

Thanks for reading/comment and for your congratulations. Glad you came back to read my fun Santa write again. Always great to see you. Have a great/fun holiday......................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/13/2023 10:38:00 AM

"3 Place" ~ Santa Needs More Zoom ~ Date Written:12/6/2023

Joseph May

Date: 12/13/2023 7:08:00 AM

St Nick speeds up his delivery, Nicely penned Paula, Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/13/2023 10:41:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun Santa Zoom write. It was fun to write for your wonderful contest. Thanks for having this contest/my placement. Have a great/fun holiday......................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/10/2023 6:37:00 PM

A fiery plume certainly beats the daylights out of a farty plum. 'Course, nobody asked me... ~ Mr. Un Solic Ted

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/11/2023 6:42:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you enjoyed my fun Santa write. You are so right. Santa should have asked you how to fix his sled. I think I will take the fire... Have a great/fun holiday......................

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/6/2023 10:15:00 PM

An enjoyable read Paula, a bit of hi-tech saved the day. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/7/2023 7:01:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you enjoyed my fun Santa write. Some hi-tech was need to fix the sled. Have a great/fun holiday......................

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/6/2023 4:05:00 PM

I'll bet those reindeer appreciated the help:) A fun one, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/7/2023 7:00:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you like my fun Santa write. The reindeer were happy for the extra zoom help. Have a great/fun holiday......................

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 12/6/2023 3:33:00 PM

A fun write Paula that brings a smile to the readers face. Even Santa's transportation needs occasional maintenance. Glad to hear he got his zoom back :-D Have a lovely evening my friend :-)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/7/2023 6:57:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you enjoyed my fun Santa write. I love to give out smiles. "Smile" Have a great/fun holiday......................

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/6/2023 3:23:00 PM

such a creative write, Paula. When I first saw 'zoom' in your title I thought perhaps your poem was about Santa using Zoom to visit boys and girls on their computers. Anyway, your poem was delightful; enjoyed reading it...have a splendid evening, Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/7/2023 6:56:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you enjoyed my fun Santa write. Have a great/fun holiday......................

Ink Empress

Date: 12/6/2023 11:08:00 AM

Ah what a brilliant write paula, this is so cute and absolutely fun to read. The ending is the best especially. Made me smile especially this extra zoom santa got, is creative story to read. Sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/7/2023 6:52:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you found my write to be cute/absolutely fun to read/ending is the best/Made you smile/creative story. Your very kind words made my day. Have a great/fun holiday......................

Silent One

Date: 12/6/2023 10:41:00 AM

This one made me smile.. lovely storytelling and poem for this time of the year.. Rhymes very well also.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/7/2023 6:49:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad you found my write to be a lovely storytelling/made you smile. I love to give out smiles. "Smile" Have a great/fun holiday......................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/6/2023 10:08:00 AM

One of your best, Paula. You made me laugh with this one, Very well commposed. Pangie xxxx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/7/2023 6:48:00 AM

Thanks for reading/comment. Glad my fun Santa write made you laugh. That makes me very happy. Have a great/fun holiday......................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/6/2023 9:52:00 AM

Santa Needs More Zoom ~ Date Written:12/6/2023