Santa May Be Late

'Twas the night before Christmas
I had myself a beer
Brushed off my apron
It was time for cheer
After all it’s Christmas eve
Hear! Hear!
It’s so exciting
A lovely atmosphere
Light fluffy snow
Santa’s sitting here
Sipping on hot coco
He’s grinning ear to ear
Comfy in his rocking chair
And looking so cavalier
Not worried by the time
Same story every year 
He waits till the last minute
Until I volunteer
To pack a lunch and
Call his every reindeer
I remind him to make haste
Grab his bag and gear
Under children’s trees
Presents don’t just appear
So much to plan and do
Fly through each hemisphere
Unless he’s thinking 
Changing his career
He better quick hit the road
And best be on his merry way



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on November 21, 2019 for contest THE NIGHT BEFORE CHRISTMAS sponsored by JOSEPH MAY  -  RANKED 3RD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 3/13/2020 8:17:00 PM
Fun Christmas write, and many great rhymes to keep it going. Belated congrats on your win!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/13/2020 10:55:00 PM
Thanks, John.
Date: 12/15/2019 3:22:00 PM
Love this, Line. Cleverly done and congrats for your win!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/15/2019 7:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/15/2019 7:58:00 AM
He always delivers on time!, Congrats on your win Line
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/15/2019 1:48:00 PM
It's a miracle! LOL
Date: 12/15/2019 6:24:00 AM
Great fun poem Line. Thoroughly enjoyable read. Congrats on your win!! Best wishes....Ron :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/15/2019 1:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ronald.
Date: 12/14/2019 9:43:00 PM
CONGRATS on your win with this clever poem, Line. Janice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/15/2019 12:18:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Janice.
Date: 12/14/2019 6:44:00 PM
I know one Santa whose real name is Jack. You'd tell him to 'Hit the Road, Jack! Congrats! ~ Ray Charles
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/15/2019 12:19:00 AM
LOL thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
Date: 12/14/2019 2:51:00 PM
Reads like an analogy of us ho,ho. Congrats
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/14/2019 3:11:00 PM
Ha Ha, Peter. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 12/14/2019 2:05:00 PM
Lovely festive poem Line, congrats. :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/14/2019 3:10:00 PM
Thanks, Gary. Much appreciated.
Date: 12/14/2019 12:55:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Lin
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/14/2019 1:32:00 PM
Thanks, Gregory. Much appreciated.
Date: 12/14/2019 12:51:00 PM
Congrats for your well-deserved win, Line! Thanks for your find comment re my win. Merry Christmas! - BoB
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/14/2019 1:32:00 PM
Thanks, Bob.
Date: 11/23/2019 11:01:00 AM
A nice cheerful festive poem Line. love phyl
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/23/2019 1:45:00 PM
Thanks, Phyllis,. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/23/2019 7:16:00 AM
He had better not "change his career" - this made me happy!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/23/2019 1:46:00 PM
Santa though you might like the job! LOL
Date: 11/21/2019 9:16:00 PM
Good one, Line! Janice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/21/2019 11:04:00 PM
Thanks, Janice.
Date: 11/21/2019 10:54:00 AM
Line, I love this festive poem and the season. I still believe. -Richard
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Date: 11/21/2019 8:42:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Richard.
Date: 11/21/2019 8:29:00 AM
This is a perfect one for the contest. I love it, Line... Bless you always, Gina
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/21/2019 8:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gina.
Date: 11/21/2019 2:37:00 AM
Santa may be late.. May be he is getting old.. Or the reindeer.. Nice thoughts...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/21/2019 8:43:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jenish. Santa is getting close to retirement age.
Date: 11/21/2019 2:24:00 AM
He's only got to work one day a year lol. Wish id had a job like that. Good luck. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/21/2019 8:43:00 PM
LOL but what a day!
Date: 11/21/2019 2:06:00 AM
Hi Line I really liked it a lot. Very good imagination. This one should do well. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/21/2019 2:14:00 AM
Thanks, Gregory. Most appreciated.
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