Santa May Be Late

'Twas the night before Christmas
I had myself a beer
Brushed off my apron
It was time for cheer
After all it’s Christmas eve
Hear! Hear!

It’s so exciting
A lovely atmosphere
Light fluffy snow
Santa’s sitting here
Sipping on hot coco
He’s grinning ear to ear

Comfy in his rocking chair
And looking so cavalier
Not worried by the time
Same story every year 

He waits till the last minute
Until I volunteer
To pack a lunch and
Call his every reindeer
I remind him to make haste
Grab his bag and gear

Under children’s trees
Presents don’t just appear
So much to plan and do
Fly through each hemisphere

Unless he’s thinking 
Changing his career
He better quick hit the road
And best be on his merry way



AP: Honorable Mention 2025, Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on November 21, 2019 for contest THE NIGHT BEFORE CHRISTMAS sponsored by JOSEPH MAY  -  RANKED 3RD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Watt Avatar
March 13, 2020 at 8:17 PM
Fun Christmas write, and many great rhymes to keep it going. Belated congrats on your win!
Gauthier Avatar
March 13, 2020 at 10:55 PM
Thanks, John.
Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 3:22 PM
Love this, Line. Cleverly done and congrats for your win!
Gauthier Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 7:50 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. Most appreciated.
May Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 7:58 AM
He always delivers on time!, Congrats on your win Line
Gauthier Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 1:48 PM
It's a miracle! LOL
Thompson Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 6:24 AM
Great fun poem Line. Thoroughly enjoyable read. Congrats on your win!! Best wishes....Ron :)
Gauthier Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 1:48 PM
Thank you so much, Ronald.
Canerdy Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 9:43 PM
CONGRATS on your win with this clever poem, Line. Janice
Gauthier Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 12:18 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Janice.
Wolf Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 6:44 PM
I know one Santa whose real name is Jack. You'd tell him to 'Hit the Road, Jack! Congrats! ~ Ray Charles
Gauthier Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 12:19 AM
LOL thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
Iversen  Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 2:51 PM
Reads like an analogy of us ho,ho. Congrats
Gauthier Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 3:11 PM
Ha Ha, Peter. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Smith Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 2:05 PM
Lovely festive poem Line, congrats. :)
Gauthier Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 3:10 PM
Thanks, Gary. Much appreciated.
Na Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 12:55 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Lin
Gauthier Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 1:32 PM
Thanks, Gregory. Much appreciated.
Hinshaw Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 12:51 PM
Congrats for your well-deserved win, Line! Thanks for your find comment re my win. Merry Christmas! - BoB
Gauthier Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 1:32 PM
Thanks, Bob.
Babcock Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 11:01 AM
A nice cheerful festive poem Line. love phyl
Gauthier Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 1:45 PM
Thanks, Phyllis,. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 7:16 AM
He had better not "change his career" - this made me happy!
Gauthier Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 1:46 PM
Santa though you might like the job! LOL
Canerdy Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 9:16 PM
Good one, Line! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 11:04 PM
Thanks, Janice.
Theraven Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 10:54 AM
Line, I love this festive poem and the season. I still believe. -Richard
Gauthier Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 8:42 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Richard.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 8:29 AM
This is a perfect one for the contest. I love it, Line... Bless you always, Gina
Gauthier Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 8:42 PM
Thank you so much, Gina.
Somadas Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 2:37 AM
Santa may be late.. May be he is getting old.. Or the reindeer.. Nice thoughts...
Gauthier Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 8:43 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jenish. Santa is getting close to retirement age.
Cunningham Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 2:24 AM
He's only got to work one day a year lol. Wish id had a job like that. Good luck. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 8:43 PM
LOL but what a day!
Na Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 2:06 AM
Hi Line I really liked it a lot. Very good imagination. This one should do well. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest
Gauthier Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 2:14 AM
Thanks, Gregory. Most appreciated.
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