Beautiful Scars Poet Couplet

Santa, I Want a Mommy Who Doesn'T Weep

Santa, I want a mommy who doesn’t weep,
maybe she could have a good night sleep.
See, she’s been so down since daddy’s death, 
I find her all the time catching her breath. 
Under the tree for me would be a tissue of gold,
to wipe away her tears until she grows old. 
She’s been so nice this year, even though she’s sad, 
I just want to give her the best Christmas she’s had. 



Dear Santa, I Want.... Contest
December 5, 2017

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Mick Talbot January 2, 2018 at 7:54 PM Congreatulations Laura! Many thanks for sharing, and your support in 2017, have a great 2018, Mick!

Line Gauthier January 2, 2018 at 10:48 AM Superbly done, Laura. Congrats on your win.

Melissa Tracy December 30, 2017 at 12:47 PM Such a heartfelt, piece I can relate to. Beautifully expressed! Not selfish but selfless and giving... such a sweet wish! Congrats on your win, Laura :)

Agnes Krampe December 29, 2017 at 3:54 PM Coming back with congrats on your well deserved win.

Sandra Haight December 29, 2017 at 3:35 PM Such a well-written poem, Laura! Congratulations on your fine placement on such a short list! Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper December 29, 2017 at 1:17 PM Back to congratulate you on your win, Laura.. Will get to anyone's heart. Hugs eve

Eve Roper December 29, 2017 at 1:16 PM Back to congratulate you on your win, Laura.. Will get to anyone's heart. Hugs eve

Jan Allison December 29, 2017 at 1:09 PM aww what an emotional poem luloo:-( we both went for sad poems and seem to have touched the sponsor's heart as we both placed:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley December 29, 2017 at 11:32 AM This is lovely, Laura, and if wishes are mirrors, you have a lovely reflection. Congrats. Viv x

Curtis Johnson December 29, 2017 at 10:04 AM Hi Laura. I like this. Congrats on your placement. Beautiful Scars December 29, 2017 at 11:14 AM thank you dear Curtis :)-luloo

Lewis Raynes December 6, 2017 at 7:14 PM I bet heaps of kids say this sort of poem to themselves after a family break up of any sort, great stuff laloo Beautiful Scars December 29, 2017 at 11:13 AM thank you dear Lewis :) -luloo

Line Gauthier December 5, 2017 at 2:36 PM Very sweet, Laura. Love it. Beautiful Scars December 29, 2017 at 11:13 AM thank you sweet Line ;)-luloo

Darlene De Beaulieu December 5, 2017 at 12:15 PM Laura, this is a beautifully written poem through a child's eyes. I enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend. Beautiful Scars December 29, 2017 at 11:13 AM thank you sweet Darlene ;)-luloo

Agnes Krampe December 5, 2017 at 8:44 AM Very moving poem, luloo, lovely. Good luck in the contest. Beautiful Scars December 29, 2017 at 11:13 AM many thanks lovely Agnes :)-luloo

Eve Roper December 5, 2017 at 7:25 AM Lovely write, Laura, that is what I started to write, but with a dad havn't finished . Luck in the contest Hugs Eve Beautiful Scars December 29, 2017 at 11:13 AM thank you sweet Eve :)-luloo