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Santa I Want

Santa I want my Dad to come home My Mum needs him she's all alone I want him to see how big I've grown I want people to know he's not unknown When we visit him at his throne It's not the same as being home Santa please so no longer I roam I want my Dad not just his Headstone. 09/12/2017

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 10:51:00 AM

Very touching, Susan. Congrats on your win.

Melissa Tracy

Date: 12/30/2017 1:05:00 PM

A wish so many wish were possible! Very touching heartfelt write! Congrats on your win, Susan! Beautifully expressed!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/29/2017 10:04:00 PM

If Santa could grant such wishes... Congrats, Susan!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 12/29/2017 3:57:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Susan, with your sad, but beautiful poem.

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/29/2017 3:37:00 PM

Such sad but well-written poem, Susan. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper

Date: 12/29/2017 1:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Susan.. Very heartfelt write . Hugs eve

Jan Allison

Date: 12/29/2017 1:17:00 PM

All but one of the winning poems are sad - I think we have touched the heart of the sponsors as we all have a similar theme. Congrats on your win Susan:-) hugs Jan