Santa Cruz 2012

It's so fun to play eachothers 
lives
write it down
come get inside
on these Giant Carnival Rides
It was a Giant Good One
And it's written all over your 
face

I was just looking for this pencil
when i was thinking of you.
It's all in your brain Big Dummy
Don't let it kill you!
Before I do
I'm getting loser
TO YOU!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 17, 2012 at 6:15 PM
I love this poem... it's so good! It's probably... you'll never believe this... one of my favorites!Once again, I want you to know that this poem is incredible... you should really think about getting it published. I know a great website that publishes poetry in a book and you can win prizes. (It's a contest.) You could easily win; this poem is dynamite! Visit poeticpossibilities.tk and you'll find it under the tab: "Monthly Contest." You really should enter it... it is a truly outstanding poem.
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