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Santa Becomes Guest

Christmas eve door bell rings Santa peeps unwraps gifts children gleam sunshine snow reindeer flee dumped Santa becomes guest December 19, 2018 Syllable count : 3-3-3 (Checked on howmanysyllables.com)

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/6/2019 1:38:00 PM

Creative way to go for the contest. Congrats on your winning work. Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/2/2019 9:19:00 AM

fun read, subimal... best congrats!...huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2019 11:51:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/1/2019 7:27:00 PM

I love the last stanza on this Charlieku, Subimal. Nicely done gave me a laugh. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Wish you a healthy and Happy New Year...Charlie