Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Haiku

Santa Becomes Guest

Christmas eve
door bell rings
Santa peeps

unwraps gifts
children gleam
sunshine snow

reindeer flee
dumped Santa
becomes guest

December 19, 2018
Syllable count : 3-3-3
(Checked on howmanysyllables.com)

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Sara Kendrick January 6, 2019 at 1:38 PM Creative way to go for the contest. Congrats on your winning work. Sara

Nette Onclaud January 2, 2019 at 9:19 AM fun read, subimal... best congrats!...huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2019 at 11:51 PM - Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina January 1, 2019 at 7:27 PM I love the last stanza on this Charlieku, Subimal. Nicely done gave me a laugh. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Wish you a healthy and Happy New Year...Charlie