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Sandstorm

You came into my life My Tuareg of the desert Brought to me by the winds of fate To fill the emptiness within Nature played her part, bringing us together Raising a sandstorm shielding us from others eyes Just as the wind causes the sand to vibrate So my body mirrors this feeling When you touch my skin, to kiss me with longing This dervish of emptiness begone. Leaving grains of sand of desire the priceless pearl of hope. Penned 11 September 2013 by Seren Roberts Contest - Build your own Sand

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2013 8:11:00 PM

nice winning poem...Linda

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/22/2013 11:36:00 PM

Thank you Linda ...Seren

Donna Jones

Date: 9/21/2013 12:15:00 PM

Congratulations

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/21/2013 12:28:00 PM

Thank you Donna ...Seren

Monterey Sirak

Date: 9/21/2013 10:06:00 AM

Fantastic, you made swirling raging sand into a romantic cocoon.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/21/2013 12:29:00 PM

Thank you Monterey ...Seren

Betty Bateson

Date: 9/20/2013 4:09:00 PM

Beautiful sandstorm.. Congrats on your win. Betty

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/20/2013 5:03:00 PM

Thank you Betty....Seren

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/20/2013 9:32:00 AM

wow, this is beautiful! Congrats on your win :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/20/2013 10:04:00 AM

Thank you for your congrats ...Seren

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/20/2013 9:27:00 AM

Wow Seren......this is lovely!! This dervish of emptiness begone." Wow........this gives one the quivers.....it is so beautiful !! Congratulations!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/20/2013 10:05:00 AM

Thank you Carrie, foir your comment and your congrats ...Seren

Len Gasun

Date: 9/20/2013 9:13:00 AM

Wow! A superb write my dear friend Seren. Thank you so much for this outstanding write of yours. So love it and i enjoyed reading it tonight. Many hearty congratulations on your great win my dear friend. love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/20/2013 10:05:00 AM

Hello Leonora thanks for your lovely comment and congrats ...Seren

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/20/2013 8:58:00 AM

the priceless pearl of hope. Seren all you wrote is embedded in this last line congrats on win Shadow x smile

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/20/2013 10:06:00 AM

Thank you Shadow.....Seren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/20/2013 7:51:00 AM

Beautiful!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/20/2013 10:06:00 AM

Thanks Richard .....Seren

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/15/2013 3:31:00 PM

You brought the sands of beauty to my eyes. Lovely work Seren.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/15/2013 7:56:00 PM

Thank you Mustapha .....Seren

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/13/2013 4:53:00 PM

This is First Place all the way. This is one of my favs, a wonderful write!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/15/2013 2:55:00 PM

Thank you ...Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/12/2013 5:13:00 AM

Nice expressions on desire and romance, good luck

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/12/2013 11:47:00 PM

Thank you

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/12/2013 12:16:00 AM

A beautiful poem with the realities of life.Its desires..loss and hope...Awesome especially your last two lines Serena.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/12/2013 11:47:00 PM

Thank you Carmaine....Seren

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 9/12/2013 12:06:00 AM

Beautiful write Seren! I love the fantastic way you've used 'sand' to weave a lovely story. Very nicely done.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/11/2013 9:37:00 PM

I love how you brought up the pearl, the pearl of hope which comes from a grain of sand! That was a great symbol, a wonderful metaphor! This write is tremendous, I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! You have surely written one of your best ones with this piece, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/12/2013 11:48:00 PM

Thank ou Russell......Seren