Seren Roberts Poet Verse

Sandstorm

You came  into my life
My Tuareg of the desert
Brought to me by the winds of fate
To fill the emptiness within

Nature played her part, bringing us together
Raising a sandstorm shielding us from others eyes

Just as the wind causes the sand to vibrate
So my body mirrors this feeling
When you touch my skin, to kiss me with longing
This dervish of emptiness begone.

Leaving grains of sand of desire 
the priceless pearl of hope.


Penned 11 September 2013 by Seren Roberts

Contest - Build your own Sand

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Poet Destroyer A September 22, 2013 at 8:11 PM nice winning poem...Linda Seren Roberts September 22, 2013 at 11:36 PM Thank you Linda ...Seren

Donna Jones September 21, 2013 at 12:15 PM Congratulations Seren Roberts September 21, 2013 at 12:28 PM Thank you Donna ...Seren

Monterey Sirak September 21, 2013 at 10:06 AM Fantastic, you made swirling raging sand into a romantic cocoon. Seren Roberts September 21, 2013 at 12:29 PM Thank you Monterey ...Seren

Betty Bateson September 20, 2013 at 4:09 PM Beautiful sandstorm.. Congrats on your win. Betty Seren Roberts September 20, 2013 at 5:03 PM Thank you Betty....Seren

Sandra Adams September 20, 2013 at 9:32 AM wow, this is beautiful! Congrats on your win :) Seren Roberts September 20, 2013 at 10:04 AM Thank you for your congrats ...Seren

Carrie Richards September 20, 2013 at 9:27 AM Wow Seren......this is lovely!! This dervish of emptiness begone." Wow........this gives one the quivers.....it is so beautiful !! Congratulations!! Seren Roberts September 20, 2013 at 10:05 AM Thank you Carrie, foir your comment and your congrats ...Seren

Len Gasun September 20, 2013 at 9:13 AM Wow! A superb write my dear friend Seren. Thank you so much for this outstanding write of yours. So love it and i enjoyed reading it tonight. Many hearty congratulations on your great win my dear friend. love lots and big hugs, Leonora Seren Roberts September 20, 2013 at 10:05 AM Hello Leonora thanks for your lovely comment and congrats ...Seren

Shadow Hamilton September 20, 2013 at 8:58 AM the priceless pearl of hope. Seren all you wrote is embedded in this last line congrats on win Shadow x smile Seren Roberts September 20, 2013 at 10:06 AM Thank you Shadow.....Seren

Richard Lamoureux September 20, 2013 at 7:51 AM Beautiful! Seren Roberts September 20, 2013 at 10:06 AM Thanks Richard .....Seren

Mustapha Mohammed September 15, 2013 at 3:31 PM You brought the sands of beauty to my eyes. Lovely work Seren. Seren Roberts September 15, 2013 at 7:56 PM Thank you Mustapha .....Seren

Arthur Vaso September 13, 2013 at 4:53 PM This is First Place all the way. This is one of my favs, a wonderful write!! Seren Roberts September 15, 2013 at 2:55 PM Thank you ...Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta September 12, 2013 at 5:13 AM Nice expressions on desire and romance, good luck Seren Roberts September 12, 2013 at 11:47 PM Thank you

Charmaine Chircop September 12, 2013 at 12:16 AM A beautiful poem with the realities of life.Its desires..loss and hope...Awesome especially your last two lines Serena. Seren Roberts September 12, 2013 at 11:47 PM Thank you Carmaine....Seren

Vicky Tsiluma September 12, 2013 at 12:06 AM Beautiful write Seren! I love the fantastic way you've used 'sand' to weave a lovely story. Very nicely done.

Russell Sivey September 11, 2013 at 9:37 PM I love how you brought up the pearl, the pearl of hope which comes from a grain of sand! That was a great symbol, a wonderful metaphor! This write is tremendous, I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! You have surely written one of your best ones with this piece, Great Work!! Seren Roberts September 12, 2013 at 11:48 PM Thank ou Russell......Seren