Sara Jama Poet Haiku

sandstone

   weather     e
                            r
                             o
                               d
                                 e
                                  d 
   sandstone  g r a v e 
                                markers eclipsed ~ 
     by contorted 
                       b e e c h

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Lin Lane May 24, 2025 at 6:35 AM well... okie dokie, Sara. Now I can easily discern your hiku like billie's. Equal billing for you allowing me to see that twisted old beech tree and good job of using eroded to show the depth of erosion. Sara Jama May 26, 2025 at 11:33 AM Thank you for the continued support.