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Sandpaper Words

I hope my sandpaper words rub you raw Want ‘em to be abrasive, stick in your craw My prickly gruff words will make your eyes bulge, and jut your jaw Baby, meet the ghetto Sandman, he gon tell you ‘bout your sins He gon give you bad dreams again I hope my sandpaper words really rub you raw Make you wanna repent, and follow God’s law Do sincerely pray them hot, grinding words make your ice cold heart thaw Baby, meet the ghetto Sandman, he gon tell you to cast away your sins He gon try to revive your conscience again I hope my sandpaper words smooth out your rough edge Place your finely detailed soul on a gleaming polished spiritual ledge Baby, you met the ghetto Sandman, he got you reflecting the light of love within He got you shining good with God again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/6/2017 5:58:00 PM
Good for you telling her how you feel.Your words were angry, when speaking top her.She did get the message. have a nice evening my friend. Peace and Love my friend.
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Date: 8/30/2017 1:56:00 PM
Hi Freddie, I love the bad a** attitude of this write! It's expression is edgy and the message and subject matter is awesome. I love your unique style of writing and I really enjoyed your poem this afternoon :)
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Date: 8/30/2017 12:01:00 PM
I think what I love most about your work is that it IS so much "in my face." I wouldn't want it any other way.
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