Sandpaper and Phantom Rainbows

When I saw him last, 
He wore grey bananas on his feet 
He had a pirate’s hat between his teeth 
Long last the man from Oliver Kitten arrived on the shores of my head 
How was he to bring such a large basket of straws and ask me to bloom a white rose 
You have been back he said with a twirl of a red gem 
Yellow kittens for my pleasure, 
Only one black dog
Keep roaring up the hill, don’t stop 
Take the bottom off the wheel
You won’t need it soon 
You are on your way down 
The pink parade will catch your fall 
Dolphins everywhere 
Even under my old brown coat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lawrence Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 5:53 AM
Your poem is Wonderful, Gabrielle. The imagery and message blooms as I read it. Good write.
Jordan Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 7:02 AM
Hi Kevin, great to hear from you. Thank you so much! Best Gab
Kiser Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 5:02 AM
Wow! Great imagery, super flow to this poem.
Jordan Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 9:21 AM
M.L., I wish that relationship had flowed as well as the poem!:) Thanks!
Lee Sr. Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Welcome as you're a flower unto the springtime, This verse is just too!! cute... Luv it!! Write on!! =D James
Jordan Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 12:36 AM
Hi James. Thank you!
Sharp Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 7:58 AM
Somewhat whimsical, and very nicely put together, a very intriguing read.
Peterson Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 6:47 PM
This one teases along the edge with poetic phrasing worth more than silent praise.
Jordan Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 11:18 AM
Thank you once again Mark!!!:)
Lawrence Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 5:49 AM
Visited many incredible p and aces within your sonnet. Thank for the bright and entendre meanings and for comments, too.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 8:57 AM
This is a fun one filled with many interesting images.
Jordan Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 11:21 AM
Hi Richard, I though that I had replied to you from my phone. Thank you!!!:)
Koria Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 6:44 PM
I love the imagery here :)
Jordan Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 11:40 AM
Thank you so much Jasmine!
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July 2, 2018 at 4:09 PM
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Jordan Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 6:02 PM
Thank you so much for reaching out to me and your very kind words. As a new member, I am trying to find my way around the site. It’s wonderful to know that there is beautiful energy out there ! Thanks again! Gabby
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