Sandpaper

By: Jeremy Aguire
Contest: Build Your Own Sand Contest
Date: 09/17/2013

I didn't measure up.
Within your plans, I wasn't enough.
My life was sloughed.
Back to the pencil and I'm rebuffed.
Now I've been scuffed.

These are imperfect stains,
They're complicated and they're erased.
You've scraped against my grain.
I was replaced just to imitate,
a chosen face.

You had to finish me,
covered in sawdust of apathy.
You've made a standard theme,
a clone life built up by makeshift beams,
your twisted dreams.

I am the centerpiece,
of your imperfect philosophies.
Humiliation cease!
Bring back my sanded identity,
my tendencies.

Please pry me off and toss.
I'm not that man that you thought I was.
Your sense of right is lost,
and there's other beams to look across,
another cause.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 22, 2013 at 8:10 PM
awesome win....Linda
Jones Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 12:16 PM
Well done....congratulations
Roberts Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 10:26 AM
congrats Jeremy ...Seren
Adams Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 9:35 AM
great use of metaphor and emotions in this piece...congrats on your win!
Richards Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 9:31 AM
There is so much emotion and honesty in this poem.........I would have placed it much higher. Well done, Jeremy!
Gasun Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 9:19 AM
An awesome write this is my dear friend Jeremy which I enjoyed reading it tonight. Thank you so much for your great win! love lots and hugs, Leonora
Hamilton Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 9:02 AM
much of your soul implanted here Jeremy congrats on win Shadow x smile
Rain Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 11:47 AM
well written , and stunning ~ 7 ~
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