Sandhill Cranes

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freeze you bitter sky skittish three trumpeting call- dark legs trail behind 11/21/2018

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 12/11/2018 4:49:00 AM

Terrific poem - I like this haiku in general because it is simply beautiful in imagery and words too ^_^ -JWE

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2018 2:55:00 PM

Nicely pictured in poetry as well as illustration

Constance La France

Date: 11/22/2018 9:06:00 AM

Eve, so sweetly penned, I love the image, the mother and baby, well done ~

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/22/2018 8:31:00 AM

This is a charming one, Eve:)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/22/2018 6:04:00 AM

when they look this pretty you wouldn't want to eat them, Happy Thanksgiving dear Eve.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/22/2018 4:16:00 AM

- A beautiful haiku, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/22/2018 3:03:00 AM

Nice hakiu Eve, can just picture the scene. Those big dangly legs do seem to trail behind. Tom.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/21/2018 11:40:00 PM

So beautiful!!

Eve Roper
Date: 11/21/2018 11:57:00 PM

thank you :) I've been taking my dog to the park in the mornings; since it’s been getting cold in 3 groups of three have been feeding, but fly off when we get near. I've never seen one before and they are beautiful and big. :)