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Sandhill Cranes

freeze you bitter sky
skittish three trumpeting call-
dark legs trail behind

11/21/2018

Copyright © Eve Roper | Year Posted 2018

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David William Breidenthal

December 11, 2018 at 4:49 AM

Terrific poem - I like this haiku in general because it is simply beautiful in imagery and words too ^_^ -JWE

Andrea Dietrich

November 22, 2018 at 2:55 PM

Nicely pictured in poetry as well as illustration

Constance La France

November 22, 2018 at 9:06 AM

Eve, so sweetly penned, I love the image, the mother and baby, well done ~

November 22, 2018 at 8:31 AM

This is a charming one, Eve:)

Mystic Rose Rose

November 22, 2018 at 6:04 AM

when they look this pretty you wouldn't want to eat them, Happy Thanksgiving dear Eve.

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 22, 2018 at 4:16 AM

- A beautiful haiku, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

November 22, 2018 at 3:03 AM

Nice hakiu Eve, can just picture the scene. Those big dangly legs do seem to trail behind. Tom.

November 21, 2018 at 11:40 PM

So beautiful!!

November 21, 2018 at 11:57 PM

thank you :) I've been taking my dog to the park in the mornings; since it’s been getting cold in 3 groups of three have been feeding, but fly off when we get near. I've never seen one before and they are beautiful and big. :)

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