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Sandcastles

Sun shining sky serene summer's sultry shine swim splashing sandcastles seeking seashells surf 3-8-19

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2019 1:33:00 PM

Back to say thanks for my win. Also, I see this time the one syllable words should all be related in both verses as well as same first letter. This was a wonderful example.

Joseph May
Date: 3/11/2019 11:20:00 AM

You're welcome Andrea, the one syllable should be related the their respective Lanternes but you can relate them to both as well

Charles Messina

Date: 3/9/2019 3:38:00 PM

Excellent example, Joseph. BTW, thank you for the generous placement in your last contest. Much appreciated...Charlie

Joseph May
Date: 3/9/2019 5:17:00 PM

You are welcome Charles..Thanks for your comment..

Lu Loo

Date: 3/9/2019 12:49:00 PM

Great example! Hard to live up to...thank you! :)-luloo

Joseph May
Date: 3/9/2019 5:16:00 PM

Thank you Lu Loo..hope every body elses' is better!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/9/2019 10:00:00 AM

'll try.

Joseph May
Date: 3/9/2019 5:15:00 PM

Give it a go Anisha..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/9/2019 7:34:00 AM

Your poem paints images I am eagerly awaiting..well written, Joseph.

Joseph May
Date: 3/9/2019 5:14:00 PM

Thank you Vijay.

Constance La France

Date: 3/9/2019 6:56:00 AM

Joseph, this is beautiful and a great example for your contest, hope I can write something worthy ~

Joseph May
Date: 3/9/2019 5:14:00 PM

Thank you DH

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/9/2019 4:34:00 AM

Great Lanterne Joseph - summer is certainly in the air! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Joseph May
Date: 3/9/2019 5:13:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer..

Jan Allison

Date: 3/9/2019 3:59:00 AM

SUPERB Joseph! I love the way you used summer alliteration throughout the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May
Date: 3/9/2019 5:12:00 PM

Thank you Jan

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/8/2019 11:24:00 PM

Now I want to linger in the sun, caress the surf- as the surf folds around me. :) This is beautiful. Your thoughts take me there in the moment. ~ Brandy

Joseph May
Date: 3/9/2019 5:10:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2019 7:41:00 PM

Lots of cool alliteration to enhance it, Joseph!

Joseph May
Date: 3/9/2019 5:09:00 PM

Thank you Andrea...

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/8/2019 7:35:00 PM

Hi Joseph, You created a lovely picture with words. It's great day at the beach. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis

Joseph May
Date: 3/9/2019 5:08:00 PM

Thank you Alexis..