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Sandcastle For Us To Hide

my hands form the walls..

sea shells cap the high towers..

water fills our mote..






Build me a Sandcastle contest..

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 2:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 5:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Michael in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 9:42:00 PM

LOve this one, Michael. Very visual. Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:16:00 PM

Congrats to my White Knight of P.S. on your first place win in Irma's contest with this romantic write my friend... enjoy sharing top spot with u and Nikko too .. enjoy with luv ...your Jersey Girl forever and always... GO JETS... cause the PATS .. are as bad as the boo birds..haha..luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/6/2010 2:01:00 PM

This is such a sweet haiku-- lucky girl! I could almost see that sandcastle -- but not you ;) you sure did a great job of hiding ;) --super congrats on your well deserved awesome win Michael, so happy to share it with you :) hugs -- nikko :)

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 9:56:00 AM

Congrats Michael for winning the first place-kashinath

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/6/2010 9:13:00 AM

wonderfull haiku win Michael, all congratulations.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 12/6/2010 9:09:00 AM

Michael, Congratulations on your wonderful win with this most beautiful poem As Always, Shar

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2010 8:03:00 AM

Congrats. Michael on your winning roll. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/6/2010 7:35:00 AM

Congratulations Michael....what a fabulous haiku!! Hooray for you!! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:05:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved first place win in the contest of Skat, Michael

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 12/5/2010 11:17:00 PM

Many Congrats Michael for topping the list of winners with this beautiful depiction of sandcastles............... Luv/Best wishes always ....Hitendra Mehta

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/5/2010 10:56:00 PM

this is wonderful Michael, congrats. Harry

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 12/5/2010 9:58:00 PM

Your hands wrote this amazing Haiku. Your hands protect a beautiful castle...Congratulations on this original and heartfelt Haiku. All the best, iolanda

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:17:00 PM

Hello, Michale you had me at 'mote.' lol. I think you and I where the only ones who used the word mote in our haiku. and many many ~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/5/2010 8:27:00 PM

Just lovely. Many congratulations for this super win.

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/5/2010 7:29:00 AM

a beautiful imageYOU have created,LOVELY!

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/5/2010 5:53:00 AM

A romantic scene you have painted with your words Michael.. All the best for Irma's contest Mr. R ;-) love Wilma

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/5/2010 5:44:00 AM

Beautiful image,my friend.Sweet Haiku.Good luck for the contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2010 4:43:00 AM

Good one..I can see the scene..Great work in two ways..Good luck in the contest...Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/4/2010 2:13:00 PM

You have created a nice image of the building of the castle, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/4/2010 12:32:00 PM

Lovely and romantic.. sweet and serene... passionate and vibrant.. my White Knight.. a sure winner for the contest ... hope those G Men wake up this weekend and don't stand for losing first place ... they are so much better than those boo birds... if they don't believe in themselves.. we are in trouble.. my friend.. good luck on both things.. your Jersey Girl forever and always luv..

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/4/2010 12:28:00 PM

I'm smiling as I picture this, Michael..back then, in our little hearts as the wave rolls in, we silently pray that it doesn't reach the barricade! lol Enjoyed this..a fav. Love, Audrey