Sandcastle For Us To Hide

my hands form the walls..

sea shells cap the high towers..

water fills our mote..






Build me a Sandcastle contest..
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Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 2:59 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 5:35 AM
Congratulations on your win Michael in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 9:42 PM
LOve this one, Michael. Very visual. Congratulations!
Sweetheart Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 3:16 PM
Congrats to my White Knight of P.S. on your first place win in Irma's contest with this romantic write my friend... enjoy sharing top spot with u and Nikko too .. enjoy with luv ...your Jersey Girl forever and always... GO JETS... cause the PATS .. are as bad as the boo birds..haha..luv..
K. Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 2:01 PM
This is such a sweet haiku-- lucky girl! I could almost see that sandcastle -- but not you ;) you sure did a great job of hiding ;) --super congrats on your well deserved awesome win Michael, so happy to share it with you :) hugs -- nikko :)
Poet Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 9:56 AM
Congrats Michael for winning the first place-kashinath
Maverick Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 9:13 AM
wonderfull haiku win Michael, all congratulations.
Ruebel Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 9:09 AM
Michael, Congratulations on your wonderful win with this most beautiful poem As Always, Shar
Freeman Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 8:03 AM
Congrats. Michael on your winning roll. Agape, Moses
Richards Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 7:35 AM
Congratulations Michael....what a fabulous haiku!! Hooray for you!! :)
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 2:05 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved first place win in the contest of Skat, Michael
Mehta Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 11:17 PM
Many Congrats Michael for topping the list of winners with this beautiful depiction of sandcastles............... Luv/Best wishes always ....Hitendra Mehta
Horsman Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 10:56 PM
this is wonderful Michael, congrats. Harry
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December 5, 2010 at 9:58 PM
Your hands wrote this amazing Haiku. Your hands protect a beautiful castle...Congratulations on this original and heartfelt Haiku. All the best, iolanda
A  Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 9:17 PM
Hello, Michale you had me at 'mote.' lol. I think you and I where the only ones who used the word mote in our haiku. and many many ~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT
Mannan Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 8:27 PM
Just lovely. Many congratulations for this super win.
Bloomsfield Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 7:29 AM
a beautiful imageYOU have created,LOVELY!
Neels Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 5:53 AM
A romantic scene you have painted with your words Michael.. All the best for Irma's contest Mr. R ;-) love Wilma
M V Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 5:44 AM
Beautiful image,my friend.Sweet Haiku.Good luck for the contest
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 4:43 AM
Good one..I can see the scene..Great work in two ways..Good luck in the contest...Reads like a winner to me..Sara
Mehta Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 2:13 PM
You have created a nice image of the building of the castle, Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 12:32 PM
Lovely and romantic.. sweet and serene... passionate and vibrant.. my White Knight.. a sure winner for the contest ... hope those G Men wake up this weekend and don't stand for losing first place ... they are so much better than those boo birds... if they don't believe in themselves.. we are in trouble.. my friend.. good luck on both things.. your Jersey Girl forever and always luv..
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December 4, 2010 at 12:28 PM
I'm smiling as I picture this, Michael..back then, in our little hearts as the wave rolls in, we silently pray that it doesn't reach the barricade! lol Enjoyed this..a fav. Love, Audrey
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December 4, 2010 at 12:02 PM
A moment in time that so many kids have enjoyed. It brings me back Michael, good luck in the contest >> James
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December 4, 2010 at 11:53 AM
Hello Michael, Isn't this fun? How lovely this is..... As Always, Shar
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