Sandcastle Fantasy

Drifting with the tide.
Sandcastles move easily...
No stability!


*For SKAT's Sandcastle Haiku contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Horsman Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 12:14 AM
enjoyed this winner, Jimmy. congrats. Harry
Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 3:27 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Locksley Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 11:59 AM
Maybe that's where I need to take up residence then. I am always moving about. Congratulations on your win, Jimmy!
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 6:01 AM
Congratulations on your win Jimmy in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 10:09 PM
Congratulations, Jimmy. NO stability, for sure!
Poet Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 9:00 PM
Congrats Jimmy on this well deserved HM win--kashinath
Sweetheart Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 3:49 PM
Congrats Jimmy on your HM in Irma's contest with this awesome write and entry my friend.. enjoy a special honor tonight with luv..
Freeman Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 8:40 AM
Congratulations Jimmy on your success with this worthy poem. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 2:27 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Jimmy
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 9:19 PM
For sure, Jimmy. YOu kind of did yours like mine. I really like this. Luv, Andrea
Haick Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 8:21 PM
Excellent Haiku, JAM! Good luck in the contest! Love, Audrey
Neels Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 11:28 AM
Love the imagery Jimmy.. All the best for the contest ;-) WN
Mehta Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 10:47 AM
Nice single thought with good images on the theme of sandcastle, Jimmy
Bloomsfield Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 10:02 AM
So much said in three lines. .great!
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