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Sandcastle Faith

grain structures of sands...
   rain vehement and strong winds
                                   disintegration 

For SKAT’s Contest

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Paul James

December 15, 2010 at 1:02 AM

A metaphor for all human efforts, maybe... A poem that is to the point and sharp. Thanks, by the way, for your response to my blog, it was much appreciated. I am learning more about the site every day through the helpfulness of yourself and others.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

December 11, 2010 at 5:18 PM

That last line has power. Your work is unique and it is always good and never pretentious or boring. Thanks, John as always. Gerard.

David Smalling

December 9, 2010 at 4:19 AM

A deserving win, my friend. Thanks for being the faithful evangelist you are.

Sara Kendrick

December 7, 2010 at 3:13 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

December 7, 2010 at 12:17 PM

Excellent, John! Sand doesn't provide much of a lasting foundation. Congratulations on your win with this haiku; I don't know how I missed it earlier. Love, Carolyn

Diane Locksley

December 7, 2010 at 12:14 PM

Great haiku John. Congratulations on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 7, 2010 at 5:53 AM

Congratulations on your win John in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

December 6, 2010 at 9:57 PM

COOL one like a parable! congratulations, john. LUv, Andrea

Kash Poet

December 6, 2010 at 6:41 PM

Congrats John on your win-kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 6, 2010 at 3:34 PM

Congrats Moses my friend..way to go.. winning a top ten spot in Irma's contest for this exceptional entry luv.. enjoy another sweet victory with luv..

Joe Maverick

December 6, 2010 at 11:48 AM

many good wishes to go with the placement John, and also thank you for your good words to me.

Eamon Duffin

December 6, 2010 at 9:45 AM

Hi. Congrats for the win with the lovely and well written piece above. Thanks for your kind comment. Eamon

Sharon Ruebel

December 6, 2010 at 9:03 AM

Hello John, Congratulations on "Skats" contest win! Well done As Always, Shar

Michael J. Falotico

December 6, 2010 at 4:31 AM

Nice one John....congrats on your win...

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 6, 2010 at 2:16 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, john

Skat A

December 5, 2010 at 9:34 PM

John~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT