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grain structures of sands... rain vehement and strong winds disintegration For SKAT’s Contest

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Date: 12/15/2010 1:02:00 AM
A metaphor for all human efforts, maybe... A poem that is to the point and sharp. Thanks, by the way, for your response to my blog, it was much appreciated. I am learning more about the site every day through the helpfulness of yourself and others.
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Date: 12/11/2010 5:18:00 PM
That last line has power. Your work is unique and it is always good and never pretentious or boring. Thanks, John as always. Gerard.
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Date: 12/9/2010 4:19:00 AM
A deserving win, my friend. Thanks for being the faithful evangelist you are.
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Date: 12/7/2010 3:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/7/2010 12:17:00 PM
Excellent, John! Sand doesn't provide much of a lasting foundation. Congratulations on your win with this haiku; I don't know how I missed it earlier. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/7/2010 12:14:00 PM
Great haiku John. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/7/2010 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win John in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 9:57:00 PM
COOL one like a parable! congratulations, john. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/6/2010 6:41:00 PM
Congrats John on your win-kashinath
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Date: 12/6/2010 3:34:00 PM
Congrats Moses my friend..way to go.. winning a top ten spot in Irma's contest for this exceptional entry luv.. enjoy another sweet victory with luv..
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Date: 12/6/2010 11:48:00 AM
many good wishes to go with the placement John, and also thank you for your good words to me.
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Date: 12/6/2010 9:45:00 AM
Hi. Congrats for the win with the lovely and well written piece above. Thanks for your kind comment. Eamon
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Date: 12/6/2010 9:03:00 AM
Hello John, Congratulations on "Skats" contest win! Well done As Always, Shar
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Date: 12/6/2010 4:31:00 AM
Nice one John....congrats on your win...
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Date: 12/6/2010 2:16:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, john
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Date: 12/5/2010 9:34:00 PM
John~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT
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Date: 12/5/2010 8:37:00 PM
Wow what a picture Moses. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 12/5/2010 5:09:00 PM
very wise, and great entry. good luck
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Date: 12/5/2010 3:23:00 PM
Very powerful Moses.. and very intense message in your lines of Haiku.. good luck in the contest by Irma.. my friend with luv..
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Date: 12/5/2010 1:48:00 PM
Nice thoughts, John, it disintegrates everything,
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Date: 12/5/2010 12:54:00 PM
Interesting work,John..Way to go..Reads like a winner..I was delighted that you stopped by my work and commented ....Sara
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Date: 12/5/2010 10:43:00 AM
wonderful entry John, best of luck in the contest
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