Sandcastle

sand congregated sandcastle build, fantasy… swept away by wind
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Fraser Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 12:08 PM
Many congratulations on your win Wilma, it's sad the winds take away our fantasies of our builds >> James :)
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December 7, 2010 at 3:10 PM
Congratulations on your win.Sara
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations on your win Wilma in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 9:52 PM
congratulations,Wilma. Nice to see another new one of yours I had missed! Luv, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 9:52 PM
sorry I have been to busy to see your poems daily. Hubbie home a lot recently. Sure wish he had a decent job!!
Poet Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 5:31 PM
Congrats Wilma on your win-kashinath
Sweetheart Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 3:30 PM
Congrats dear Wilma on your super win in Irma's contest with this exceptional entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten win along with your victory dance with luv..
Maverick Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 12:23 PM
good to see your placement Wilma.
Freeman Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 8:18 AM
Congratulations Wilma on your 5th Place, Agape, Moses
Falotico Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 4:27 AM
Congrats on a well deserved wn!!!!
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 2:13 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Wilma
Barrow Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 12:56 AM
congrats wilma
Horsman Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 11:29 PM
this is so good Wilma, congrats it is so deserved. Harry
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December 5, 2010 at 9:29 PM
Wilma~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT
Haick Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 9:01 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, so well deserved, Wilma! Have a great week! Love, Audrey
Mannan Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 8:35 PM
Wow Wilma. Many congratulations for this win.
Fraser Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 11:22 AM
Even sandcastles eventually fade away. Kool entry for the contest. Good luck Wilma >> James :)
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December 5, 2010 at 9:39 AM
Don't you just hate it when the winds of life wash away our fantasies, Wilma? Excellent entry for the contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 7:59 AM
another front runner with this fascinating 'ku, wilma.. all the best i the contest! warmest, nette
Onclaud Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 7:59 AM
another front runner with this fascinating 'ku, wilma.. all the best i the contest! warmest, nette
Falotico Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 7:17 AM
Nice image Miss S. We build it up and the ocean and wind take it away...best of luck my dear..with Love Michael
Mehta Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 7:08 AM
As sandcastle are like dreams, short lived thing, Wilma
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