Sandcastle

Seagull swim in sky
Ocean drowns tan sandcastle 
Beached black whale dying
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Brotherton Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 3:36 PM
So much imagery and emotions in this haiku, Karen.
Jones Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 6:14 PM
I appreciate you reading Jerry
Rodrigues Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 11:46 AM
A whole lot of imagery in a few lines. Nature is cruel.
Jones Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 12:12 PM
Yes but funny how it balances out
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 3:28 AM
Sad to hear of this happening. Sometimes they can be saved and sometimes they can't. Sara K
Jones Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 5:22 AM
True. Thanks for reading Sara!
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