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if only we still had all the time in the world and our youth to squander all the paths to explore and wander at our leisure the echo amplified do you not hear the clamor as each grain of sand through the hourglass counts down each hour to me it's as loud as thunder a warning for us to make amends and reconcile the time we've left though it might be wonderful to linger soon enough we'll be called to our next and ultimate adventure Submitted on May 2, 2023 for contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE NO.1213 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND AP: 2nd place 2023, Honorable Mention 2023, Honorable Mention 2023 Originally posted on March 23, 2023

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Date: 3/24/2023 3:18:00 PM
At every angle of the hourglass, wanting it to turn over and begin again.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/24/2023 8:29:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim ~
Date: 3/23/2023 4:42:00 PM
That picture is as beautiful as your poem, Line. Gorgeous!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/24/2023 8:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Fin ~
Date: 3/23/2023 2:03:00 PM
a poem to make one stop and think, Line. The sand keeps falling as days turn into dunes. Really nice write:)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/24/2023 8:30:00 PM
Thank you very much Daniel, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

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