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Sand Through My Fingers

Faster than hourglass more sand slip through my fingers words I couldn't tell you pick them up one by one ************************

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Donna Jones

Date: 12/21/2013 7:37:00 AM

Ah...more than words. It seems sometimes we let ..maybe pride or stubbornness keep us from saying those words....at least me...thanks for the reminder...awesome poem...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/25/2013 7:57:00 PM

dreamy very dreamy! I hope you are writing for my contest? Light & Love

Funom Makama

Date: 11/21/2013 8:09:00 AM

This is splendid and beautiful. Good write friend and keep the fire burning. its really nice coming across such a piece in a lovely day like this. Cheers! Funom Makama.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/15/2013 9:02:00 AM

hello, kashi bud!... wassup; do write again..miass ya!..:) huggs

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/15/2013 6:35:00 AM

enjoyed this a lot.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2013 12:36:00 AM

Hi again.I'm finally done for the night!! See you later, my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2013 4:37:00 PM

love how sand and words both slip away . GREAT job, Kash. I sure enjoyed seeing this new one from you.

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/11/2013 6:25:00 PM

The sand, like words are hard to put back in place once they have slipped away. So nice to see your poetry here again !!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/11/2013 5:50:00 PM

This is an incredible and wonderful write my friend! You have surely enlightened me by the splendor of this lovely poem! What a terrific piece, truly a glorious poem, Great Work!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/11/2013 12:41:00 PM

yo, kashi... imaginative tanka as the description of counting sand bewilders me... wow.. come visit!..:) hugggs