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Sand Storm

We will finish this Task Come what may Wasting away the beauty of our day A dark cloud of contempt Winds of lies in the air Lightening beating our souls bare Where is the Sorrow Is Their any Empathy at all To Author this Storm Is beyond comprehension An....Yes..... Dust can only Fall........

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Date: 4/18/2017 8:52:00 PM
Deeper...Niiice!!
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Date: 3/22/2017 12:21:00 PM
Hi Ninette : I loved the way this poem flowed! My Compliments.
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Date: 8/16/2015 12:51:00 AM
Ninette, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page :). **SKAT**
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Date: 8/14/2015 1:19:00 AM
A great write, especially last line!
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Date: 12/29/2014 9:23:00 PM
The endurance of a mother's love is truly tested . . . . nicely done. 7
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