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Sand Storm

We will finish this Task 
Come what may
Wasting away the beauty of our day
A dark cloud of contempt
Winds of lies in the air
Lightening beating our souls bare
Where is the Sorrow
Is Their any Empathy at all
To Author this Storm
Is beyond comprehension
 An....Yes.....
Dust can only Fall........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/18/2017 8:52:00 PM
Deeper...Niiice!!
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Date: 3/22/2017 12:21:00 PM
Hi Ninette : I loved the way this poem flowed! My Compliments.
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Date: 8/16/2015 12:51:00 AM
Ninette, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page :). **SKAT**
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Date: 8/14/2015 1:19:00 AM
A great write, especially last line!
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Date: 12/29/2014 9:23:00 PM
The endurance of a mother's love is truly tested . . . . nicely done. 7
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