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Sand Storm

lost and blind
                                the sands of time
    
                                    lack gravity




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mental illnesstimefree verse

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Bernard Chan

May 3, 2019 at 8:18 PM

Love this. Fantastic imagery.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 4, 2019 at 8:28 AM

Thank you :) xomo!

Rhona Mcferran

April 17, 2019 at 11:47 PM

Another FAV for me... profoundly penned!! LOVE it! ;)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 18, 2019 at 7:16 AM

Thank you Rhona! :))) xomo <3

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 12, 2019 at 3:18 PM

Well, very meaningful if one takes it as a message dearest, Maureen! Either way, well done!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 18, 2019 at 7:15 AM

CayCay Godwin

April 12, 2019 at 1:13 PM

Been there, felt that - well done. CayCay

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 12, 2019 at 2:40 PM

...the understanding, not the...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 12, 2019 at 1:18 PM

You just made my day ;) HUGS! xomo <3

Mystic Rose Rose

April 12, 2019 at 11:38 AM

They slip through our fingers at a most alarming rate, better make good use of them dear friend, Have a great day, Make it count xo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 12, 2019 at 1:19 PM

Lovely said my friend, thank you, xomo

Joseph May

April 12, 2019 at 11:29 AM

Nicely expressed Mo..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 12, 2019 at 1:20 PM

Thank you Joseph :) xomo

Honestly J.T.

April 12, 2019 at 9:39 AM

Cool poem; I like the mental picture -JT

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 12, 2019 at 1:21 PM

Thank you so much J.T.! :) xomo

M. L. Kiser

April 10, 2019 at 7:45 PM

That's powerful piece of work Maureen; I can see that and it's wild!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 11, 2019 at 7:16 AM

Thank you so much M.L.! :) xomo!

Gershon Wolf

April 10, 2019 at 4:18 PM

I'm with Rico: Such profundity within such economy of verse. Lovely done, as my friend Maureen says! ~ I.M.I.C. (Inspirational Muse in Chicago. LOL).

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 10, 2019 at 9:27 PM

I do don't I ;) Thank you sweet G! xomo

Rico Leffanta

April 10, 2019 at 3:38 PM

Quite profound for so few words! Aloha! Rico

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 11, 2019 at 7:17 AM

Thank you my friend! :) xomo!

Tom Cunningham

April 10, 2019 at 2:02 PM

Have only seen them on TV, they are devastating for sure, you summed it up well Maureen. Tom.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 11, 2019 at 7:17 AM

They are powerful, metaphorically and otherwise ;) xomo!

Sunita U.D Palawon

April 10, 2019 at 11:22 AM

Short but powerful. :) Sunita

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 11, 2019 at 7:18 AM

Thank you Sunita! :) xomo

Jeff Connelly

April 10, 2019 at 9:31 AM

Always a wonder of the tightest words with no lost syllables Maureen. I was just talking about you at work yesterday. Seriously. You make so much of so few words. Simply amazing and always thought provoking. My sincere admiration.

Jeff Connelly

April 11, 2019 at 3:29 PM

I've been reading a lot of David McHattie. I don't know if you know him Maureen?

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 11, 2019 at 7:24 AM

Thank you my friend! Feel like I'm hogging the lime light ;) May I suggest a few poets here that I admire for you to check out, P.M. Richter, Anthony Slausin and Anna Hopper. Spread the love. xomo!