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Sand Storm

lost and blind the sands of time lack gravity ***

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Bernard Chan

Date: 5/3/2019 8:18:00 PM

Love this. Fantastic imagery.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/4/2019 8:28:00 AM

Thank you :) xomo!

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 4/17/2019 11:47:00 PM

Another FAV for me... profoundly penned!! LOVE it! ;)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/18/2019 7:16:00 AM

Thank you Rhona! :))) xomo <3

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/12/2019 3:18:00 PM

Well, very meaningful if one takes it as a message dearest, Maureen! Either way, well done!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/18/2019 7:15:00 AM

Caycay Jennings

Date: 4/12/2019 1:13:00 PM

Been there, felt that - well done. CayCay

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/12/2019 2:40:00 PM

...the understanding, not the...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/12/2019 1:18:00 PM

You just made my day ;) HUGS! xomo <3

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/12/2019 11:38:00 AM

They slip through our fingers at a most alarming rate, better make good use of them dear friend, Have a great day, Make it count xo

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/12/2019 1:19:00 PM

Lovely said my friend, thank you, xomo

Joseph May

Date: 4/12/2019 11:29:00 AM

Nicely expressed Mo..

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/12/2019 1:20:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :) xomo

Honestly J.T.

Date: 4/12/2019 9:39:00 AM

Cool poem; I like the mental picture -JT

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/12/2019 1:21:00 PM

Thank you so much J.T.! :) xomo

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/10/2019 7:45:00 PM

That's powerful piece of work Maureen; I can see that and it's wild!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/11/2019 7:16:00 AM

Thank you so much M.L.! :) xomo!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/10/2019 4:18:00 PM

I'm with Rico: Such profundity within such economy of verse. Lovely done, as my friend Maureen says! ~ I.M.I.C. (Inspirational Muse in Chicago. LOL).

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/10/2019 9:27:00 PM

I do don't I ;) Thank you sweet G! xomo

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/10/2019 3:38:00 PM

Quite profound for so few words! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/11/2019 7:17:00 AM

Thank you my friend! :) xomo!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/10/2019 2:02:00 PM

Have only seen them on TV, they are devastating for sure, you summed it up well Maureen. Tom.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/11/2019 7:17:00 AM

They are powerful, metaphorically and otherwise ;) xomo!

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 4/10/2019 11:22:00 AM

Short but powerful. :) Sunita

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/11/2019 7:18:00 AM

Thank you Sunita! :) xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 4/10/2019 9:31:00 AM

Always a wonder of the tightest words with no lost syllables Maureen. I was just talking about you at work yesterday. Seriously. You make so much of so few words. Simply amazing and always thought provoking. My sincere admiration.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/11/2019 3:29:00 PM

I've been reading a lot of David McHattie. I don't know if you know him Maureen?

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/11/2019 7:24:00 AM

Thank you my friend! Feel like I'm hogging the lime light ;) May I suggest a few poets here that I admire for you to check out, P.M. Richter, Anthony Slausin and Anna Hopper. Spread the love. xomo!

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/10/2019 8:57:00 AM

Love it, Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/10/2019 9:16:00 AM

Thank you Line! xomo :)